Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted August 10, 2005 Updated August 10, 2005 Status Incomplete | Yet all the same I fell
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
In every silent whisper
In every darkness falls
A shadow cast from this love
A breath upon these walls
The wind that whips around here
Is breaking down this cage
I built so sturdy round this heart
They say it can't be saved
I dream of your caresses
Eyes mirrored within my own
Looking rapt upon desire
A safely silent moan
I will not let you hear
The secrets in my soul
The need that is a weakness
For I am much too cold
And like the wind that blows here
Destruction in its wake
So be the love if `twas released
Yet my heart you'd forsake
I cannot say `I love you'
No matter how I want
For wanting is not welcome here
With your heart as the taunt
You would not offer freely
All that this mind requires
And I won't think with this heart
Or gift you those desires
Just know that once I loved you
Yet did not know the spell
To come undone enough to try
Yet all the same I fell
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Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:35:05 PM
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Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:24:24 PM
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Right, that does it. Stop writing these poems, they're too damn good. If you keep writing this poems, the undead corpses of Keats and Wordsworth will rise from the grave and kick you repteadly in the shins because of their vast undead jealousy over how much better you are then them. Stupid zombie avant garde. But seriously, this poem really cries out about need and suffering to avoid breaking everything. It's also a perfect accompaniment to the romance in my Balance trilogy.
The ending of this one was really deep! Beautiful. ^^- Post more work!