In every silent whisper

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Jinx_in_Pink

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August 10, 2005
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August 10, 2005
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 180
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Yet all the same I fell

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Submitted: August 10, 2005 • Updated: August 10, 2005
Word count: 180 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 133

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Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:35:05 PM

Trinity_Fire on August 10, 2005, 11:35:05 PM (Chapter: 1)

oooh, this one was awsome! you must tell me how you manage to still get it in the stanzas and to rhyme, that's too hard for me.... x_X Heh.
The ending of this one was really deep! Beautiful. ^^- Post more work!

Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:24:24 PM

Dr_Postal on August 10, 2005, 2:24:24 PM (Chapter: 1)

Right, that does it. Stop writing these poems, they're too damn good. If you keep writing this poems, the undead corpses of Keats and Wordsworth will rise from the grave and kick you repteadly in the shins because of their vast undead jealousy over how much better you are then them. Stupid zombie avant garde. But seriously, this poem really cries out about need and suffering to avoid breaking everything. It's also a perfect accompaniment to the romance in my Balance trilogy.