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I hate your eyes

I hate how they manipulate my heart...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 11, 2005 • Updated: August 11, 2005
Word count: 127 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 125

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Dr_Postal on August 13, 2005, 2:39:30 PM

Dr_Postal on (Chapter: 1)
Dr_PostalHow thoroughly beautiful. What more can I say?

Trinity_Fire on August 11, 2005, 2:32:10 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_Fireah, another poem! This one was really simple and clear, and I love all the ways you came up with tio describe eyes. ^^- Beautiful, keep it up. ^_^-