Beyond the Flames
Submitted June 27, 2004 Updated June 27, 2004 Status Incomplete | All hope is failing in the land of Laktra. Haioc the dreaded dragon has cast fear over the land. When all fails the leader of the King's knights seeks help from a soceress,and i simple peasant seeks freedom from the dragon's lair. They say don't run
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Chapter 1 - Haioc
Submitted: June 27, 2004 • Updated: June 27, 2004
Word count: 712 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 215
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Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 4:32:05 PM
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Very well written, and I love your description and style. I would also like to see more =) You could use a few commas here and there, but it's pretty neat =)
pirateloverandstoryteller on July 28, 2004, 11:43:00 PM
pirateloverandstoryteller on (Chapter: 1)