Abyss of Doom
Submitted November 19, 2008 Updated March 23, 2009 Status Incomplete | this is where my poems are going from now on. (i'm gonig to try to add some longer ones... when i dig them up from wherever im hiding them). i appreciate any criticism and comments people have!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - my moon of sand
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
Word count: 44 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 210
Chapter 2 - Unholy
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 67 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 187
Chapter 3 - random
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 42 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 202
Chapter 4 - the light in the dark room
Submitted: December 5, 2008 • Updated: December 5, 2008
Word count: 112 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 209
Chapter 5 - confusion in love
Submitted: March 23, 2009 • Updated: March 23, 2009
Word count: 69 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 189
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OceanSoul on April 21, 2009, 12:03:52 AM
dropdeadjasmine on December 4, 2008, 3:26:04 AM
woah...dude u have talentKira1 on December 3, 2008, 11:16:57 PM
this isnt quite finished..... give me time....
It screams passion for the topic.
The rythem is perfect even though that might of not been intended.
The message which forms from the lines blending together is quite disctinctive and intriguing.
Amanda Approved.