The Murder
Submitted February 7, 2009 Updated February 8, 2009 Status Incomplete | um. this is just a poem i wrote. so enjoy! or not. its kinda... well youll see! XD
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Chapter 1 - The Murder
Submitted: February 7, 2009 • Updated: February 8, 2009
Word count: 471 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 214
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hipeople on May 23, 2009, 2:17:39 PM
hipeople on (Chapter: 1)
Oh!Thats very good!For some reason it reminds me of "The Minister's Black Veil" lol but very awesome poem!KokoroTsuki24 on May 24, 2009, 1:34:21 PM
KokoroTsuki24 on (Chapter: 1)
why thank you! and the what now?! is that a movie? but i SWEAR i wrote this myself! it took me like two hours (so long!) but i still wrote it. but it was kinda fun to write! i enjoyed myself.hipeople on May 24, 2009, 1:42:31 PM
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Its a short story by Nathaniel Hawthorne. Its about a minister who one day starts wearing a black veil b/c he feels guilty for some sin he committed but you never know what it was...KokoroTsuki24 on May 24, 2009, 1:56:34 PM
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oh ok! yeah they do sound the same!so its a book. and is Nathaniel Hawthorne like a novel writer too? i get the feeling ive read some books by him cuz he sounds familiar. but i could just be going crazy...JamietheGuardian on February 16, 2009, 12:43:07 PM
JamietheGuardian on (Chapter: 1)
Woa O.O thats awesome. Its intriguing, bone chilling, and masterful. Made me breathless. Great job^^herio907 on February 7, 2009, 6:26:34 PM
herio907 on (Chapter: 1)
That was very good. It sent chills down my spine. But, that's a good thing! ^^KokoroTsuki24 on February 8, 2009, 11:07:29 AM
KokoroTsuki24 on (Chapter: 1)
yay! thx! XD and it was supposed to do the chills thing. it does for me too and i wrote it! lol