Chapter 8 - Memories that Don't Belong

 
Okay another Authors note...

Gaara- normal

Gaara- thinking

Gaara- Demon -yes there will be demon talk in here

Gaara- Demon thinking

Gaara- character perspective

Okay still voting for pairings... So far...

Kiba -Ino/ 1

Shikamaru -Temari/ 1

Neji -Ten Ten/ 1

VOTE or else I can't do next chapter... I really need votes for...

Sakura - Lee or Sasuke! But a friend thought maybe Sia? Well vote!

Sia -need vote

Choji -need vote

Shino - need vote

Disclaimer...

Lee: "Lily-san dose not own Naruto! But she owns Lily's family and herself!"

Author: "Whoa! I don't own my self! I own Lily Uzumaki I'm Lily Uzimaki!"

Lily: "Well actually you do own your self, me and my family..."

Author: "Oh..."

Lee: "I don't get it..."

Every one but Lee Sweat dropped.

No Such Thing as Home

Chapter 8

Memories that Don't Belong

Naruto

Naruto and his friends had just stopped for the night, every one was silent on the flight, because they feared that Lily or Neji might loose concentration. Lily had gone right on schedule but, Neji was seven minutes behind he apparently was lost for awhile. Naruto also noticed Hinata acting funny when she sat next to him she kept getting distracted and stuff and wouldn't look him in the eye. Naruto swore she had a fever before they left...

Lily was acting funny when they got off the huge bird, she kept coughing and fuzzed out every few minutes. Lily said she was going into the forest to get some fire wood, but she'd been gone for quite some time. Hinata was already brought back some and they were now cooking some dinner.

"Hey where's Lily?" Sai asked.

"I don't know maybe she got lost..." Neji said activating his Byakugan.

"I don't see her... She probably put a genjutsu on herself to keep hidden from enemy ninja." Neji said giving up his search.

"Well I'll go find her, any one else coming?" Naruto asked.

"No need..." Lily appeared from around a tree carrying a few logs neatly chopped and stacked.

"Sorry I took so long but, I only cut down dead trees..." Lily said putting the logs by the fire.

"Oh, okay!" Naruto said trying to put them in the fire.

"Uh, I'm not really hungry you know so I'm just gunna start patrol duty. I'll be back in a few hours, okay?" Lily asked backing up from Naruto.

"Oh, well go on ahead, your sure your not hungry?" Sakura said.

"Yeah I'm fine..." Lily said walking away, they lost sight of her.

Why the heck wouldn't she want some food? We haven't had any thing to eat all day? Maybe she's just not accustomed talking to us yet. She probably wants to be alone. But I'll bring her back if she isn't here in two hours. But mean while I can hear the instant raman calling me... Naruto thought licking his lips.

Lily

Lily reached another clearing in the forest they were in, she made sure no one was looking and collapsed. She felt as though swords were puncturing every nerve her body possessed, she knew it, another Jinchuuriki was dieing...

She saw a white flash before stepping into a black and white picture, she hated this part it's where she had to relive all this miserable Jinchuuriki's most painful and happy moments...

"Hey hold on, this one has Seven BIG moments. Most Jinchuuriki's only have like... Four. He must be pretty old... I'm guessing this one is the four tails..." The Wolf boomed appearing beside her in his human form. He looked like Lily in her demon form, only short black hair, normal colored skin, nails and teeth. But his clothing was that of a samurai, he wore black armor. He was quite skinny and looked to be in his late twenties. But unlike Lily he had even sharper nails and teeth his eyes weren't black they were blue.

The memories started flooding in... There was a boy about the age of ten crouching behind a couch, a man looking for some one was in the door way of the apartment.

"Ahh, there you are brat! Get up time for your punishment, we heard that you wouldn't go in the cage with the old crocodile! Don't you think that deserves punishment?" The man loomed over the boy holding a long sword to his throat.

"No... No I don't..." The boy shuddered as the sword ran over his skin. Some blood ran down from where the sword touched him.

Lily also felt the same cut on her throat, as she knew she would. The wolf mean while was putting his arm around Lily's shoulder.

"Yes you do! Old crocy missed his chew toy." The man scratched both the boy's arms the boy screamed as the man had also made a huge gash in his shoulder.

"You know if you would just play with crocy I wouldn't have to do this to you, crocy would!" The man laughed as he now moved the sword to his chest and slashed across his stomache.

The boy cried and fell down a bloody heap, Lily cringed and the wolf knelt down and sadly put a hand on her shoulder. But Lily never knew why, but when ever this happened -a jinchuuriki died- there were memories that Lily had to relive with the wolf but, only she felt what ever pain they felt. And her blood wasn't red it was black when she got hurt though... The wolf can't explain it... No one can...

Another white flash happened, Lily knew that this one was a happy one. And so it was, there the same boy passed his genin final exam. Lily's other wounds were staring to heal it self so Lily could take a break. At least for the moment...

Naruto

"It's been four hours I'm going to find Lily, any one else coming?" Naruto asked.

"I'll co-come." Hinata got to her feet and put down her empty bowl of soup.

"Okay we'll be back in a bit!" Naruto shouted as he put a few more logs on the fire and ran off.

Naruto had forgotten that he was supposed to search for Lily. He was busy putting the tents up, eating, checking equipment, eating, keeping the fire and eating. He had to admit that he shouldn't have eaten so much. It was pretty dark Hinata could guide them back if they got lost though. He was really glad she was coming he didn't know why though.

'That kid, has a crush and he doesn't even know it! Hahahahahaha!' The Kyuubi was laughing, gasping and remembering his first crush at the same time talk about painful...

Naruto jumped through some trees and heard coughing and gasping. He ran praying that it wasn't Lily. And well as we all know... It was Lily...

Lily was sprawled upward on the grass it the middle of the forest black liquid seeping through her clothing, and more liquid was coming from her chest. It was like watching an invisible sword cut her body up and go through her clothes untouched. Every once and a while her body jumped at the impact or her face was contorted with pain. After the black liquid bloomed out of her shirt near her heart her mouth brought up more of the black liquid. Naruto rushed over to Lily her eyes were wide open but just stared.

Naruto nudged her gently, she didn't respond. "Lily? Lily are you awake?" Naruto whispered in her ear. Still no respond, Hinata mean while was freaking out. Oh, no is she? What is attacking her? If I found out who did this I'm gunna kill u'm! But right now Lily needs to get wrapped up... Hinata thought trying to walk.

"Hinata do you have a first aid kit with you?" Naruto asked.

"Ye-ye-yes yes I-I d-do." Hinata pulled out a box with bandages, peroxides, emergency water, poison antidotes and some pincers.

"I don't know how to treat these wounds your going to have to..." Naruto gestured for her to come over to where Lily was laying.

"Okay." Hinata came over and asked Naruto to help her with a few wounds on her arms.

But Naruto noticed still more appeared. Than a voice in his head spoke, but this voice didn't sound right...

"Hey Kit, Lily is reliving a jinchuuriki's memories you'd best just get back and wait for her to regain conciseness before you go fixing those wounds. Other wise they'll just keep coming." Naruto was in the Seal prison, but the fox wasn't in the cage instead a man was. He had red hair, eyes and clothes he also had sharp nails and teeth. Naruto guessed he was about early thirties, he wore a red kimono with orange flames on the bottom. He had his red hair was cut short in a Kiba style.

"Who are you?" Naruto asked coming up to the cage where the Kyuubi usually was.

"It's me your great uncle! I don't like talking in my Demon form unless I'm with another full Demon." The man came over and ruffled Naruto's hair.

"Okay... So what should we do with Lily? And what's that black stuff all over her?" Naruto said removing the hand from his hair.

"It's blood, she doesn't know why it's black. Tell your girl friend to wait... the wolf's chakra and her own demonic chakra should heal her from any deadly wounds."

"Okay." Naruto woke up from his trance and grabbed Hinata's shoulder.

"Hinata, stop. We have to wait for the bleeding to stop..." Naruto tried pulling her away but stopped.

Lily's face was covered in 'blood' her clothes were soaked and Lily's eyes were still wide open. Hinata was also covered in blood, but unlike Lily she was trembling.

"Wha-what ha-happened?" Naruto asked as he let go of Hinata.

"I-I don't know Sh-she ju-just sta-started get-getting all these cu-cuts and I ran out of ban-ban-band-bandages..." Hinata had tears in her eyes. I don't know what to do... I don't even know if Lily is alive and if I could help her if she was.

But Naruto didn't get to finish his thoughts as Lily's eyes blinked. Naruto just gapped as Lily went into a similar state that he would, when he used the fox's chakra only her eyes and chakra was black instead of red. Lily put her arms over her chest and stomache. She began to speak. "Wh-why are you here?" She asked ignoring the pain all over her body.

"We... came looking for you, we need to get you to the camp... And how come your skin didn't turn black this time..." Naruto asked crawling closer to her.

"Oh... Well this is the wolf's chakra. The other one was my demon form... Like the more chakra I have in this state the more tails I get and the more the wolf gains controls. But in my other form that's just me, the older I get the more tails I get and the more stronger. Naruto you don't have as much demon in you, so you don't get any tails..." Lily said struggling to get up.

"Okay just lay down I'll get Saku-" Naruto was interrupted.

"No I can heal myself... Don't tell any one else except the 'Hokage' if she needs to know." Lily said.

"Okay... Well how do we explain all the blood?" Naruto said pushing Lily back down.

"Well I can wash up and... My wolves and can bring me some clothes." Lily said sitting up.

"How are you gunna call them?" Naruto asked.

"Well there always around... in fact right now there getting my clothes. Midnight has been following us every day..." Lily said falling into Naruto's lap.

"Okay I'll go back and tell them that every things fine. I'll get some more bandages for the deeper wounds you can't heal. I'll make up some explanation..." Naruto said laying her back on the ground.

"How did you know that I can't heal all of them?"

"I can early heal a deep gash and you have several..." Naruto said pointing to the still bleeding stomache.

"Oh..." Lily slowly fainted Hinata elevated her limbs. And Naruto went to fetch more bandages, and make up excuses.

Midnight came back quickly, with the same basic out-fit only a Water kanji was on the front of the shirt. Lily used her ability to control water to clean her self and clothes after the she woke up and the Wolf's chakra healed more of her cuts. Than Hinata and Naruto worked on her deeper injuries. Naruto brought Lily back to the camp and all three instantly fell asleep. Neji still wanted to know what the black liquid all over Hinata and Naruto was and why Lily was covered in bandages but Naruto convinced him that it was all taken care of.

Sia

"Well, were off again!" Naruto shouted getting on his bird.

Lily was better by the morning, every one wanted to know what happened but Naruto and Lily refused to talk. Lily had a few bandages on her legs and chest but other wise she was fine.

Lily was still flying better than Neji but she kept kind getting in a trance all the time. Lily decided that they should have two way radios today incase Neji got lost again. Sia was on a settle like thing, since he was last he had to hold on tight to his reins. Shino was a bit nervous first at the thought of flying but now he was cool with it. Sia liked flying, it was nice to have the wind blow in his face but the bird feathers bothered him.

When next they landed they were at the village gates, Lily was acting kinda funny like she kept staring at the gates and stuff. I wander why she's just standing there? Is she amazed or scared hm... Only one way to find out! Sia slowly sneaked over to Lily and tapped her on the shoulder.

"Watch starin at?" Sai asked.

"Th-the... Big... Giant... Huge... Gates." Lily said turning around.

"I've seen bigger..." Sai said flatly.

"Wow!" Lily went over and started knocking on the gates in several different spots trying to see if any one would open them.

"Uh, Lily maybe I should open the gate..." Neji said with a 'because I know the combination and you don't' look.

"Okay!" Lily got back and Neji simply said. "We're back! Let us in!"

The gates opened and revealed a brightly shining city Lily smiled brightly. Two Chuunin were waiting at a booth waving at them. "So how did it go?" Shikamaru was there with Chouji.

"It went well there's my cousin!" Naruto said dragging Lily to Shikamaru.

"Hello I'm Akimichi, Chouji, this is Nara, Shikamaru who are you?" Chouji said.

"Uzumaki, Lily and um... nice to meet you to!" Lily said offering her hand. Shikamaru and Chouji shook it.

"So are you Naruto's other friends? And where is the Hokage tower?" Lily asked pulling back her hand.

"Yep we are, but we can't letcha in without your Ninja I.D. card and your 'intern approval' forms." Shikamaru said holding out his hand.

"Okay!" Lily groped in her pocket and held a small card that had her picture, distinguishing marks, rank, missions and family info. She also held out a huge pamphlet where Tsunade signed her name.

"Okay Naruto escort her to the Hokage tower Tsunade's waiting there for you." Shikamaru said giving back Lily her stuff.

"This way!" Naruto grabbed Lily and again dragged her through the city. Sia fallowed making sure Naruto didn't hit any body with 'Lily the rag doll'.

Naruto pulled her so quickly Lily only saw blurs pass her, when she saw the huge mansion she gasped but, only in a few minutes she was inside it.

Naruto knocked on the door, a woman opened it, she only saw Naruto and patted him on the shoulder. "I'm so sorry Naruto, did you a least get to see her a bit before she died?" She said.

"Huh, no she didn't die she's right here." Naruto pulled Lily into the room.

"Oh... So your Lily?" Tsunade said looking her up and down.

"Yep, you must be Tsunade-sama." Lily bowed deeply.

"Okay I'll need to see your forms and junk." Tsunade said sitting back in her chair.

"Here they are! Um... Back in my village I'm Jounin, so do I have to like battle a Jounin to prove my self? Or something like that?" Lily asked.

"Oh yeah will do that tomorrow... Are you up to that?" Tsunade asked looking at Lily's bandaged chest and legs.

"Oh heck, I'll do it today if you want!" Lily said stretching.

"No, today you have to get a team, move in and get a medical check up." Tsunade said looking her in the face.

"Okay, I can do the check up now, I'll meet my team after that and I don't know where I'm staying..." Lily said.

"Well you could stay with Naruto!" Sai said.

"Yeah, you can stay in the apartment next to mine! That way I can help you get around!" Naruto said agreeing.

"Okay now the check up..." Lily said.

Tsunade

Today had been... Surprising, to say the least. 1st Naruto came back with his cousin 'alive'. These wounds would have killed her! They would have killed a Naruto even! 2nd Lily had different injuries and was willing to go up against a jounin! 3rd She was smiling brightly ignoring the fact that those wounds should make her cry out loud.

Well the check up should explain every thing...

"Come with me Lily." Tsunade gestured to a door.

"Okay I'll see you later Naruto!" Lily called walking to the door where there was another lady.

"This is Shizume, she will bring you to the hospital and you will tell her your medical history... All of it." Tsunade said Lily nodded and followed her.

"Okay Naruto where did Lily get the new injuries?" Tsunade asked.

"Well a... Sia could you leave..." Naruto said, Sai bowed and walked out.

Naruto explained about Lily 'feeling' a Jinchuuriki dieing and there memories. He explained that because she was a demon she could heal fast, but she couldn't before because her chakra was cut off. He explained what happened during the 'dream' with Kyuubi and the wolf. He mentioned something about 'keepers' and about her brother being the leader of the akatsuki. And her life back at the village.

Tsunade was trying to review what happened.

"So your telling me... That Lily is a half wolf part fox demon, a Jinchuuriki to the most powerful demon, and that her grandpa is that demon, her brother is the leader to the akatsuki, two of her other brothers are missing, she has probably killed more than ten thousand people on accident, her village Tortured her do it, she should be dead, your great uncle in trapped inside you, Lily can feel Jinchuuriki dieing, relive the Jinchuuriki's memories and your father the forth Hokage was also a half demon..." Tsunade was surprised she even remembered that.

"Yep! And you forgot that Lily also has arachnophobia!" Naruto said.

"WHAT THE HECK!" Tsunade shouted, she now stood up grabbing the edges of her desk.

"Hey I didn't know either..." Naruto said rubbing the back of his neck.

"Oh Lily also can sing pretty good! And play the guitar!" Naruto added doing an air guitar.

"Listen, as far as any one knows Lily is just a regular jinchuuriki, okay? And so are you... " Naruto nodded.

"But some times she gets black chakra to surround her and grown fangs and claws like me. And she has her own demon form too." Naruto said Tsunade was rubbing her temples.

Shizume

"Okay sit down, first tell me right now if you have any major injuries or illnesses." Shizume asked Lily.

"Well I have yellow fever and th-" She was cut off when Shizume darted to a cabinet.

"You have yellow fever? You don't look like you do..." Shizume had a shot in her hand she was putting a white liquid in it.

"My chakra is suppressing it... I don't have to much chakra right now I'm relying on my Jinchuurriki chakra. I've been doing this for about two years..." Lily said showing Shizume black chakra in her hand.

"Okay well, this is a vaccine for yellow fever... Do you have any other injuries." Shizume put the needle in Lily's arm.

"A... No, well there's one on my leg but now I have my own chakra back I can heal that!" Lily happily removed the bandages. Her wound was gone...

"Wow..." Shizume decided she was done. If Lily could heal that in two days she's gunna be fine...

"Thank you so much Shizume-sama!" Lily hugged her.

"A... it's okay?" I've never really got that reaction before, but I should tell Tsunade about the fever. And wait she's a Jinchuuriki! No I must have herd wrong... But after that shot I gave her she should rest but oh, well...

"Well can I go?" Lily asked.

"Sure... But I need your medical history." Shizume let her out and led her down stairs.

"I've never been in a hospital, my brother always took care of me... I guess you could say... I have had no vaccines, and I never needed them. And I constantly major injuries and illnesses, but now that the yellow fever is gone I should be fine..." Lily said walking happily down the stairs.

"How old are you?" Shizume asked watching Lily's skin grow to a healthier color with in a few seconds.

"I'll be fifteen in five days and two weeks!" Lily said doing a cart wheel down the stairs now.

"Oh..." Shizume said, seeing Lily walk on her hands down the next flight.

"I'm guessing it went well?" Sai said waiting in a chair.

"Yep! Where's Naruto?" Lily asked her feet flipping to the floor.

"He's telling Tsunade about you... I'll lead you to your apartment." Sai said getting up and opening the door Lily.

"I'll see you later Shizume!" Lily waved while walking out the door.

"Okay..." Shizume started walking to Tsunade's office.

Naruto walked out of the Hokage office hands in his pockets, Shizume saw him.

"Tsunade wants to talk to you..." Naruto said not looking her in the eye.

"Thanks..?" Shizume walked up stairs.

Tsunade was waiting for her like Naruto warned. She was fuming, Shizume told her how Lily's check up went which lightened up her mood.

"So we don't need to worry if she gets hurt to much..." Tsunade said.

"What team are you going to place her in?" Shizume asked.

"Naruto's... Or Shikamaru's... Maybe Hinata's... I don't know..." Tsunade said looking at the book where all her available ninja's were.

"Hm... Kurenai is well 'pregnant so if Lily gained Jounin she can be on their squad..." Tsunade said.

"How are you going to test her?" Shizume asked.

"I'm going to let her face two Chunin and a Jounin if that's to easy she can face an ANBU. All In one on one battles of course..." Tsunade said looking to see who was available tomorrow.

"I'll have her face... Sakura, Kiba, Guy and Yamoto... That'll do maybe I should have her be on Naruto's team until she becomes more acquainted with the village though..." Tsunade said checking her book again.

David

"Well what do you think?" Sasuke said. He had just told them his plan.

"I can't think of a better one... But do I have to have the brats..." Karin spoke up.

"Yeah, we don't want to baby sit some one only one year older than us... That's just to easy... Now if Juugo went with us that might be a challenge and if we went with you well... That's what we've been aiming for!" David said as Kia just laughed, Juugo looked the same, Suigetsu was jealous that he wasn't included, Karin looked pissed and Sasuke was smirking.

"Well I guess Karin could go alone and Juugo and Suigetsu could go together... Karin could go search half the Iwa, Suigetsu and Juugo could search the rest of the Earth country, Kia and David could go to the rest of the Iwa and I could search the capital. Okay we set out now we meet back in a week, we'll meet in the capitol. David and Kia I suggest you find Karin first so she can show you the way to the capitol." Sasuke said making up his mind.

"I'm fine with that!" Kia and David chimed.

"Yeah whatever..." Suigetsu said Juugo nodded.

"Okay." Karin said.

They split up provisions and set out David looked at Kia he hadn't said any thing in a while -which was unusual-. "Kia you know I'm sure Lily's okay she can hold her own..." David said looking at the canyon they were passing through.

"Yeah but... I mean we've been gone for like three years and Lily has changed... What if we don't recognize her? What if she doesn't recognize us?" Kia kicked a stone into a part of the cliff.

"Lily will remember! And we know what she looks like remember the Locket..." David took out his pocket watch. It had a bear etched into it Kia did the same only his had a falcon in the front.

They both flipped it open there was a picture and the three of them standing in front of the woods they lived in. Lily was in the middle and Kia was on the right David to the left they were standing underneath their favorite Willow tree. David and Kia were crouching over Lily who was sitting with fire flies around her, a couple were even lifting up her hair. Which was gave it a magical effect in the night. They we're eleven they took that picture, one month before they left, it was on Kia and Lily's birthday. David's birth day was the day before, but they all celebrated on the same day.

David remembered looking through his fathers journals and their fathers journals, Lily and Kia helped him and he helped them. Lily figured out that Kia and herself had one uncle, one great uncle and her grandpa was inside her. But David found that he had no other family...

I remembered when Lily got her demon form, she should have one tail by now yep on her fourteenth birthday, she'll have two soon... If what Sasuke said was true about the Jinchuuriki dieing Lily should be hurting allot now... Since she has to relive it all, I remember the first time it happened we got to meet grandpa. That was very odd Kia and I were screaming our heads off... Good times, good times I wish we would have had more good times...

'Well no life is perfect' I remember Lily saying that when grandpa told her she was a demon, Kia was really sad that day. I guess he always thought Lily had a hard life and he always got the better end...

"Yeah, but do you think she hates us?" Kia said, David had thought about that one though.

"NO! Lily would never hate us... I bet she's out there with Naruto looking for us right now! We cared for each other, remember? I was the peace keeper, you were the hope keeper and Lily was the light keeper. I fixed stuff, you protected us and Lily gave us strength to go on..." David said grabbing the front his shirt.

"Exactly we abandoned her, we left her! David we let her go on alone! Don't you under stand we left her ALONE with the orphans! SHE CAN'T GO ON BY HER SELF, SHE WON'T USE THE ORPHANS TO HELP HER! Lily's to nice she wouldn't put the orphans through that! She probably has died already and it's all our fault!" Kia said budging David out of the way.

"I knew you were going to say that... Look Lily is out there trying to find us, and she probably thinks she abandoned us! So stop mopping and lets find her before Cage dose! You, hot head, are you listening to me?" David moved over to Kia who was at the end of the canyon with his face in the side of the cliff.

"I'm sorry David I just... I... I just am worried about her... That's all." Kia pounded on the wall with his fists and made a huge dent in the cliff.

"Well you don't need to worry if we find her so lets go!" David grabbed Kia's arm and ran down a rocky trail.

Little do they know... The four tails Jinchuuriki has already died... And big brother is watching, waiting for the next targets...

So how will Lily do in her 'test' tomorrow? What team will Tsunade choose? Will David and Kia recognize Lily? Will Lily recognize them? What trouble will Kia and David get into? Find out in Chapter nine!

I'm writing another story! But updates will be the same, don't worry! I still need more pairing votes especially Sakura -Lee or Sasuke? I revised chapter seven so the the heritage should make more sense! Thank you Krakengirl for alerting me to that! I'll have Lily in her dress up soon along with her brothers! But no Cage for you, MUHAHAHA! I'll draw Wolf and Kyuubi maybe though! Oh if any one knows what ten is in Japanese tell me PLZ!

Oh and what do you want more of? Kia and David, Sasuke, Karin, Suigetsu, Juugo, Lily, Naruto or Gaara? Cause I can only do so many lives... I'm mostly focusing on Naruto, Lily, Sasuke and her brothers. But Gaara is a big part in this but I only write about him when well some thing big happens. Maybe next chapter... Other wise he just dose normal Kazekage stuff...

Vote, Read and Review!

krakengirl
2007-06-29
ch 7, reply i dont get it...well just keep on updating!

krakengirl
2007-06-23
ch 1, reply good with the clover

Uchiha Madara
2007-06-23
ch 6, anon. yet another good chapter :D

Uchiha Madara
2007-06-20
ch 5, anon. this is a realy good story it would fit in with the actual naruto storyline can wait till the next chapter:)

Reidluver
2007-06-18
ch 3, reply Another interesting chapter! A request, that you put your stories through spell check, PLEASE! I can figure out what you're saying most of the time, but sometimes it just makes it really hard to understand what you're trying to say.

I like the little Rock Lee, and am interested to find out more about the Uzamaki blood trait! What is his?

Reidluver
2007-06-18
ch 2, reply I like how you show the thoughts of each character. It is a little hard to follow with whose thoughts are whose though. And I think you write his name as Sai, not Sia. Anyway, good chapter!

Reidluver
2007-06-18
ch 1, reply Hee. Nice start. I liked how Gaara was calm as he told Kankurou to let in the she-wolf, and how Naruto thought, "I have a cousin . . . no a dying cousin" yes, it's sad, but the way you wrote it was funny.

Uchiha Madara
2007-06-14
ch 1, anon. This is the best can't wait until chapter 2

fred finch
2007-06-06
ch 3, anon. this is a great story i cant wait till the next chapter

IceCreamXD
2007-06-06
ch 3, replyGOOD STORY! continue soon, but take your time as well :P

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