No such thing as home
Submitted June 15, 2007 Updated April 10, 2008 Status Incomplete | What if Naruto had a cousin -Lily? What if Sasuke has her brothers? What will Naruto do to help Lily get them back? Or will their be a broken promise along the way?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Finding the Past
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 15, 2007
Word count: 1947 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 292
Chapter 2 - The Lost leading the New
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 15, 2007
Word count: 3487 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 252
Chapter 3 - A Song for My Brother
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 6229 • Size: 30k • Comments: 1 • views: 247
Chapter 4 - Where do I belong
Submitted: June 17, 2007 • Updated: June 17, 2007
Word count: 4198 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 309
Chapter 5 - I Promise
Submitted: June 17, 2007 • Updated: June 17, 2007
Word count: 3065 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 266
Chapter 6 - Will You be There
Submitted: June 21, 2007 • Updated: June 21, 2007
Word count: 4539 • Size: 22k • Comments: 0 • views: 229
Chapter 7 - You Never Left
Submitted: June 30, 2007 • Updated: June 30, 2007
Word count: 5108 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 265
Chapter 8 - Memories that Don't Belong
Submitted: July 6, 2007 • Updated: July 6, 2007
Word count: 5861 • Size: 29k • Comments: 0 • views: 248
Chapter 9 - If You Want It
Submitted: July 18, 2007 • Updated: July 18, 2007
Word count: 7290 • Size: 36k • Comments: 0 • views: 254
Chapter 10 - Round One
Submitted: July 31, 2007 • Updated: July 31, 2007
Word count: 4650 • Size: 23k • Comments: 0 • views: 257
Chapter 11 - Round Two
Submitted: August 18, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 4590 • Size: 23k • Comments: 0 • views: 242
Chapter 12 - The Message
Submitted: September 20, 2007 • Updated: September 20, 2007
Word count: 3961 • Size: 20k • Comments: 0 • views: 236
Chapter 13 - Face Down of The Siblings
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 3202 • Size: 16k • Comments: 0 • views: 202
Chapter 14 - Out Numbered but Still Determined
Submitted: December 20, 2007 • Updated: December 20, 2007
Word count: 4077 • Size: 20k • Comments: 3 • views: 251
Chapter 15 - Fear and Dread
Submitted: December 20, 2007 • Updated: December 20, 2007
Word count: 2484 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 228
Chapter 16 - Struggle for Love
Submitted: February 1, 2008 • Updated: February 1, 2008
Word count: 3476 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 201
Chapter 17 - The Choice
Submitted: April 10, 2008 • Updated: April 10, 2008
Word count: 3523 • Size: 18k • Comments: 0 • views: 216
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hflp on April 10, 2008, 12:05:21 PM
Excellent UpdateLilyUzumaki on April 11, 2008, 10:29:19 AM
I know, the other chapter is half way done, but it might take a while, to get on here.hflp on February 1, 2008, 6:15:32 AM
This chapter was worth the wait.LilyUzumaki on February 1, 2008, 6:21:19 AM
Thank you! I'm really sorry I haven't updated ealiermusicismylife on February 1, 2008, 5:58:50 AM
yay!!!! i really lyked this chapter it was really good!LilyUzumaki on February 1, 2008, 6:20:16 AM
thx! I FINISHED UP THIS MORNINGhflp on January 15, 2008, 10:25:36 AM
Gaara a Lily will make a perfect couple.LilyUzumaki on January 17, 2008, 8:14:56 AM
I think so... I'm sorry I haven't updated! Gah! I have a new computer and I had to transfer all my files!hflp on January 10, 2008, 12:34:56 PM
This story is kick @$$. Keep it upLilyUzumaki on January 11, 2008, 11:34:23 PM
Thank you!musicismylife on December 21, 2007, 5:17:47 AM
wootness!!!!!!!! i heart gaara and lily 2gether!!!!!!LilyUzumaki on December 25, 2007, 12:50:03 AM
THX, you know I almost never get pairing votes... THX I'm already on it!musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 10:20:51 PM
yay!!! :Pmusicismylife on December 21, 2007, 5:08:53 AM
This is what happened in the small text just so you know. I copied it and pasted it here for every one to read. This is the one at the bottom i didn't do the one at the top. By the way great work!! very eventful chapter!!! keep it up!!Naruto was okay besides half the bones in his body being broken and some parts of his skin red. But his bones were healing quickly, while they camped in a cabin Sasuke's team had used. It seemed that Naruto did not have to use his chakra in one shot like Lily. But his burns lasted longer, and he had only three major burns David couldn't heal right away. And as soon as they found some medicine they would heal fast like his bones. But Lily might die tonight; she could die from now until we get her to a medic, a professional Medic. David thought, grimly wishing that he could be a great medic, then Lily wouldn't have to almost die every day. But maybe our new life will be a bit more profitable! And Lily won't get as many injuries. Maybe, maybe...
"Well, you should get some shuteye; I'll look after pale beauty." Kakashi said from an open door were every one else was sleeping on mats.
"Oh I dunno, what if the fever goes up? Or the infection spreads? Or if somebody steals her while I'm not here. What if she was taken away... I couldn't stand it, I was away long enough. I couldn't stand it, imagining what the Queen was doing to her, what Lily was going through. And without us... We were the only ones that she would let help her. I'm, glad you people found her, I owe you allot for what you and Naruto did for her." David said looking at Kakashi who had joined him on the floor.
"We didn't do anything..." Kakashi said smiling.
"Yes you did, I can see it in her eyes, and Kai can see it too. Whenever she hears one of you she smiles, and her eyes grow big and watery. She only used to do that when Kai and me came home, from missions. But now... She's letting people in, I'm glad too." David said leaning over Lily petting her hair.
"What about the Orphans? Naruto said she loves the orphans..." Kakashi said remembering what he had said the other day.
"Oh well that's different, I love the Orphans too, I mean I'd die to save every one of them but... They're more of a duty, some thing that we should do, some thing we all feel we must protect. But Lily is an obligation, it's impossible not to love her, but you don't have to. She's not a weak little child, she's a teenager that can handle her self, but she won't... On the inside she won't hurt a fly, she wont even kill a spider with her own hands. She uses traps or surprise attacks. But Lily can't stand the feel of blood, except her own..." David said stroking Lily's pale skin and the stitches that were turning crimson from their usual white appearance.
"I see, like a friend and a student... I guess I do feel differently about them." Kakashi said thinking a little longer.
"Kind of, but your students are your friends, their your comrades. But it would be more like a little child being beaten on the street, you take him in and when he wants to go you let him, and he'll come back and visit on occasion.
But what would you do, say if Naruto was dieing, and the kid off the street was all alone some where with a bunch of other kids. Would you go to Naruto or see if the children were doing okay?" David said looking at Kakashi now.
"I'd go to Naruto of course." Kakashi said without hesitation this time.
"There you go... The Orphans have a new caretaker with them now, our time was over. Lily stayed but would she bother little children to help her? No, because they might get hurt and Lily cannot stand that." David said now putting another blanket over Lily.
âBut we her friends can be there for her; we can help her, because she knows that we care more for her life then ours. We'd never be happy without Lily there to give us a good song. That's what we missed most about being away. Her voice is heavenly, and there is nothing but a life I wouldn't risk to hear it." David said feeling her fore head again.
Whooo!!! That was a good chapter right! I liked it, it took me two days! I'm sorry I didn't draw the fight out longer but I got bored with it easily, I just had to put in a sad/happy ending!
So what will happen to Lily? Will they make on time? What happened to Juggo, Karin, Suigetsu, Itachi and Tobi? Why didn't I mention Gaara or Jiraiya in here? -I didn't feel like it- and what of Cage? Find out in Chapter Fifteen!
Happy Turkey day! And REVIEW! A big thanks to KrackenGirl who has responded every time!
LilyUzumaki on December 25, 2007, 12:49:23 AM
THX for translation! Total life saver! musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 10:20:36 PM
ur welkyz!!LilyUzumaki on December 20, 2007, 11:42:59 AM
For some reason some of the text is really small I don't know why.nextguardian on November 29, 2007, 3:17:59 PM
Really nice work, great description!LilyUzumaki on December 1, 2007, 12:27:42 AM
Thx!musicismylife on November 25, 2007, 6:04:07 AM
i heart dis story lyk ttly