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Jak's bro

The story of John(Jak's brother)finding his bro, but geting into trouble along the way

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - All nightmares have a begining
Submitted: January 24, 2004 • Updated: January 24, 2004
Word count: 763 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 203

Chapter 2 - Meet Sig
Submitted: February 1, 2004 • Updated: February 1, 2004
Word count: 441 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 167

Chapter 3 - Melon
Submitted: February 13, 2004 • Updated: February 13, 2004
Word count: 171 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 193

Chapter 5 - Melon the medum
Submitted: April 6, 2004 • Updated: April 6, 2004
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 155

Comments

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pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM

pinkgirl on (Chapter: 3)
pinkgirluuuuuuuu... O.O she sounds scary.... NOT that im scared or anything! *makes tough mug* hehe... happy late birthday by the way! nice chap!

Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM

Collen on (Chapter: 3)
CollenMay I do the challenge? well, I don't really want to enter but can I still draw it for you? good chapter!

Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM

Linkstarking on (Chapter: 2)
LinkstarkingYa, whats your charicter like

Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM

Collen on (Chapter: 2)
Collenthis is very interesting

pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM

pinkgirl on (Chapter: 2)
pinkgirlok, nice chap. Maybe u should describe things more? some details? I like ur writing style, this is great! ^_^

Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM

Collen on (Chapter: 1)
Collen This is cool adds to favs*

Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM

Linkstarking on (Chapter: 1)
LinkstarkingYa

supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM

supershykitty123 on (Chapter: 1)
supershykitty123Want 2 be in my story? I hope so I think ur story iz kule! ^_^

Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM

Linkstarking on (Chapter: 1)
Linkstarking...............I can't help it I'm thinking as hard as I can your treating me like a little kid I'm 15 i'll be 16 on feburay 12

pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM

pinkgirl on (Chapter: 1)
pinkgirl^^;;;; Then stop talking toa urself. I dont think it gives a good impression to those whos reading this. Glad ya made it one chap. but STILL make them longer. making chapters this is short, is just taking up space. Not rude, but ment as a suggestion for improvement!^^ and i still like ur writing style, nice and detailed. update soon!