Jak's bro
Submitted January 24, 2004 Updated April 6, 2004 Status Incomplete | The story of John(Jak's brother)finding his bro, but geting into trouble along the way
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - All nightmares have a begining
Submitted: January 24, 2004 • Updated: January 24, 2004
Word count: 763 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 203
Chapter 2 - Meet Sig
Submitted: February 1, 2004 • Updated: February 1, 2004
Word count: 441 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 167
Chapter 3 - Melon
Submitted: February 13, 2004 • Updated: February 13, 2004
Word count: 171 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 193
Chapter 5 - Melon the medum
Submitted: April 6, 2004 • Updated: April 6, 2004
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 155
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pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM
pinkgirl on (Chapter: 3)
uuuuuuuu... O.O she sounds scary.... NOT that im scared or anything! *makes tough mug* hehe... happy late birthday by the way! nice chap!
Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM
Collen on (Chapter: 3)
Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM
Linkstarking on (Chapter: 2)
Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM
Collen on (Chapter: 2)
pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM
pinkgirl on (Chapter: 2)
Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM
Collen on (Chapter: 1)
Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM
Linkstarking on (Chapter: 1)
supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM
supershykitty123 on (Chapter: 1)
Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM
Linkstarking on (Chapter: 1)
pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM
pinkgirl on (Chapter: 1)
^^;;;; Then stop talking toa urself. I dont think it gives a good impression to those whos reading this. Glad ya made it one chap. but STILL make them longer. making chapters this is short, is just taking up space. Not rude, but ment as a suggestion for improvement!^^ and i still like ur writing style, nice and detailed. update soon!