Jak's bro

Chapter 1 - All nightmares have a begining
Submitted: January 24, 2004 • Updated: January 24, 2004
Word count: 763 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 203

Chapter 2 - Meet Sig
Submitted: February 1, 2004 • Updated: February 1, 2004
Word count: 441 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 166

Chapter 3 - Melon
Submitted: February 13, 2004 • Updated: February 13, 2004
Word count: 171 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 192

Chapter 5 - Melon the medum
Submitted: April 6, 2004 • Updated: April 6, 2004
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 155

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pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM

pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM (Chapter: 3)

uuuuuuuu... O.O she sounds scary.... NOT that im scared or anything! *makes tough mug* hehe... happy late birthday by the way! nice chap!

Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM

Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM (Chapter: 3)

May I do the challenge? well, I don't really want to enter but can I still draw it for you? good chapter!

Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM

Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM (Chapter: 2)

Ya, whats your charicter like

Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM

Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM (Chapter: 2)

this is very interesting

pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM

pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM (Chapter: 2)

ok, nice chap. Maybe u should describe things more? some details? I like ur writing style, this is great! ^_^

Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM

Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is cool adds to favs*

Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM

Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM (Chapter: 1)

Ya

supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM

supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM (Chapter: 1)

Want 2 be in my story? I hope so I think ur story iz kule! ^_^

Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM

Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM (Chapter: 1)

...............I can't help it I'm thinking as hard as I can your treating me like a little kid I'm 15 i'll be 16 on feburay 12

pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM

pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM (Chapter: 1)

^^;;;; Then stop talking toa urself. I dont think it gives a good impression to those whos reading this. Glad ya made it one chap. but STILL make them longer. making chapters this is short, is just taking up space. Not rude, but ment as a suggestion for improvement!^^ and i still like ur writing style, nice and detailed. update soon!