When You're Far Away

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Submitted
May 2, 2005
Updated
May 2, 2005
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 195
Comments: 2
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I wrote this poem for my older brother. He is moving out tomorrow. It didn't hit me until a couple of days ago how much i was really going to miss him.

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Chapter 1 - When You're Far Away
Submitted: May 2, 2005 • Updated: May 2, 2005
Word count: 195 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 196

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AZNgummigurl on May 28, 2005, 12:36:06 AM

AZNgummigurl on May 28, 2005, 12:36:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

sorry to be so cheerful on the last comment, I simply scanned through the whole thing. Now that I have slowed down, it was truly the most depressing poem I could've ever read in my whole entire life.
Buddy: I agree, we know what it's like to have someone move out, especially someone you grew up with.
AZNgummigurl: We are sorry for our unconcern for this type of situation. Plz feel better! ^-^

AZNgummigurl on May 12, 2005, 9:07:25 AM

AZNgummigurl on May 12, 2005, 9:07:25 AM (Chapter: 1)

awesome poem! ^-^ kinda depressing in a way.. but it was excellent!