The Mysterious One

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Author
Mat_monster_2000

Submitted
April 4, 2006
Updated
April 4, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 2k
Words: 494
Comments: 2
Views: 1,798
Faves...: 2
Rating: 0

this is a story about a "mysterious" person that no one could find. they saw their shadow but never saw their face. a 10 year old girl name Raja is called into action to save the person and bring them into the life of others.

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Category: Miscellaneous

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Mysterious One Speaks
Submitted: April 4, 2006 • Updated: April 4, 2006
Word count: 494 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 308

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Flyinmonkey1010 on April 8, 2006, 4:15:57 PM

Flyinmonkey1010 on April 8, 2006, 4:15:57 PM (Chapter: 1)

Hey, I've read ur story! I think it's pretty KEWL so far! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
@(*..*)@ TIS A MONKEY!!!!

bluefairy421 on April 5, 2006, 8:42:29 AM

bluefairy421 on April 5, 2006, 8:42:29 AM (Chapter: 1)

That's a very nice beginning! My only changes would be that "incase" should be "in case" and you are missing quotes at the end of the letter (since you started with them). This sounds great though!

Blue Fairy