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Broken

A short poem I wrote the night that I broke up with my boyfriend..It's a few months old, but I still like it. :)

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Chapter 1 - Broken
Submitted: June 8, 2004 • Updated: June 8, 2004
Word count: 150 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 184

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BringerOfSilence on August 11, 2005, 10:55:07 AM

BringerOfSilence on (Chapter: 1)
BringerOfSilenceWow! Great! It's a total inspiration for me! I love it! You need some cookies! *Puts 1,000,000 cookies on a plate for you*

-Nekome

TifaBakura on September 23, 2004, 6:02:43 PM

TifaBakura on (Chapter: 1)
TifaBakura*Crys* Wahhhh so touching *sniff* Ace work! Love it!

akyofan on August 8, 2004, 3:07:53 AM

akyofan on (Chapter: 1)
akyofanthis is fantastic, ur an amazing poet, keep up the great work!

Maroon005 on July 5, 2004, 4:02:36 AM

Maroon005 on (Chapter: 1)
Maroon005omg this is so touching and beautiful! what makes it so great is that u expressed ur emotions in it..something that i can never achieve. great poem anyhow^^

tiler_james on June 19, 2004, 2:29:29 AM

tiler_james on (Chapter: 1)
tiler_jamesawesome. love it. ^_^