brother's unite

Chapter 1 - Alone in this cruel world
Submitted: June 24, 2008 • Updated: June 25, 2008
Word count: 723 • Size: 3k • Comments: 17 • views: 581

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PunkGBgirl on November 26, 2008, 8:28:07 AM

PunkGBgirl on November 26, 2008, 8:28:07 AM (Chapter: 1)

NOOOOOOO JOOOOOOOE!
great story!

darkyoshi555 on June 29, 2008, 12:20:27 AM

darkyoshi555 on June 29, 2008, 12:20:27 AM (Chapter: index)

ok, i read the rest of it.
*sniff*
so sad.
but i likes it!

alitta2 on June 26, 2008, 7:22:38 AM

alitta2 on June 26, 2008, 7:22:38 AM (Chapter: 1)

Nice story but it's sad too. Poor Joe!

xXcandydemonXx on June 26, 2008, 5:43:05 AM

xXcandydemonXx on June 26, 2008, 5:43:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

great job! :D

nikki001997 on June 25, 2008, 9:28:58 PM

nikki001997 on June 25, 2008, 9:28:58 PM (Chapter: 1)

that's a cool story!do more!

MetaKnight56 on June 26, 2008, 12:44:20 AM

MetaKnight56 on June 26, 2008, 12:44:20 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanks
:D
i will

halfdemon912 on June 25, 2008, 9:02:27 PM

halfdemon912 on June 25, 2008, 9:02:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

hey! this is an awsum story :D
ive never seen this series befor, but that didn't stop me from enjoying it :D poor Joe! RIP

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 9:13:23 PM

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 9:13:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

yeah
i miss him
DX

CrystalKnight on June 25, 2008, 12:33:55 PM

CrystalKnight on June 25, 2008, 12:33:55 PM (Chapter: index)

awww how sad, I like it tho!

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 12:46:48 PM

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 12:46:48 PM (Chapter: index)

thanks
:D

marisa937 on June 25, 2008, 4:42:27 AM

marisa937 on June 25, 2008, 4:42:27 AM (Chapter: 1)

very well done^^
poor jeo:_: i dun't nu him but i dun't care i still feel badT__T..
but it is a awesome fic firend^^

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 5:14:42 AM

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 5:14:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanks
:D

AncientMoonLight on June 25, 2008, 3:44:31 AM

AncientMoonLight on June 25, 2008, 3:44:31 AM (Chapter: 1)

AWWWWW that is so said that Joe died T_T but vrey good loov it ^^

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 3:55:39 AM

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 3:55:39 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanks
:D

darkyoshi555 on June 24, 2008, 1:28:10 PM

darkyoshi555 on June 24, 2008, 1:28:10 PM (Chapter: 1)

hey, it is awesome so far!

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 2:00:11 AM

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 2:00:11 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanks
:D