Immortality

Chapter 1 - Immortallity
Submitted: February 7, 2006 • Updated: February 7, 2006
Word count: 179 • Size: 1k • Comments: 9 • views: 254

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rasengan on February 23, 2007, 10:45:47 PM

rasengan on February 23, 2007, 10:45:47 PM (Chapter: 1)

tell the truth, this isn't exactly a piece of shoot... ur right tho it is creepy..sheesh ** shivers down my spine**

Morbidmauler on September 10, 2006, 5:27:02 AM

Morbidmauler on September 10, 2006, 5:27:02 AM (Chapter: index)

*stares* um, is that good or bad?

Dashrath on July 14, 2006, 3:06:01 AM

Dashrath on July 14, 2006, 3:06:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

If my friend read this he would piss in his pants,man!

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:52 PM

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:52 PM (Chapter: index)

Its Ok.

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:14 PM

Srinidhi on June 20, 2006, 5:18:14 PM (Chapter: 1)

M O R B I D huh?

Morbidmauler on June 7, 2006, 6:28:44 AM

Morbidmauler on June 7, 2006, 6:28:44 AM (Chapter: index)

is so.

deshwitatlover on June 7, 2006, 6:06:16 AM

deshwitatlover on June 7, 2006, 6:06:16 AM (Chapter: index)

wow that's good, i cant write a poem that doesn't rhyme. Keep it up! it not that big of a piece of shoot either, lol ^-^

RickRaccoon on April 17, 2006, 12:53:40 PM

RickRaccoon on April 17, 2006, 12:53:40 PM (Chapter: 1)

o.o whoa..that was awsome. i cant write poems without a rhyme scheme but this is great. you definitly got a fav from me ^.^ rock on!

rick

Morbidmauler on April 1, 2006, 1:19:56 AM

Morbidmauler on April 1, 2006, 1:19:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

killaboy, how did i know it was only a matter of time before you hunted me down no matter where i go?

killaboy on March 17, 2006, 11:34:06 PM

killaboy on March 17, 2006, 11:34:06 PM (Chapter: 1)

its ok i guess

Morbidmauler on February 14, 2006, 3:57:34 AM

Morbidmauler on February 14, 2006, 3:57:34 AM (Chapter: 1)

thanks! u guys rock. i cant believe i actually got comments on this piece of shoot!

vampiric_angels_kiss on February 13, 2006, 9:44:18 AM

vampiric_angels_kiss on February 13, 2006, 9:44:18 AM (Chapter: 1)

You have a lot of talent. Keep it up.

orchid on February 13, 2006, 7:12:40 AM

orchid on February 13, 2006, 7:12:40 AM (Chapter: 1)

awesome poem!

I read your request and i will do it for you!^^