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Chapter 13 - Final Finale

Patrick has finally set up a place for n00bs, though its a day away from Varrock, so he and Aay hardly get to see eachother, and a new power has arisen.

Chapter 13 - Final Finale

Chapter 13 - Final Finale
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If you listen to `Like a Prayer' (I don't know by who) it helps with me making this story for some reason…
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<b>If you listen to `Like a Prayer' (I don't know by who) it helps with me making this story for some reason….. I love the song!</b><b></b>
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<b>Also… there aren't any horses in Runescape, are there? Well… since this story is more applied to real life, I'm going to have horses in this story, k? </b>
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The tears poured down my face. I bit my lip in my fury, and I could feel it bleeding. “<i>What</i>. Have. You. <b><i>DONE</i></b>?!” I screamed
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I felt cold metal against my neck. “I didn't, sadly. Old Man Anton did. Who'd know Patrick would be such a loser?” Ragetti said.
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I clenched the grass, the grass not standing a chance against my strength being fueled with fury. The grass came out and I clenched it in my hand. I looked back over my shoulder at him. “You won't, and will never, live again to see the next day,” I growled and lifted my hand as fast as I could to grab the sword against my neck. I grabbed hold of it, the sword cutting deep into my hands. I knocked it away and turned onto my back, moving my legs in order to trip him. I was able to make him fall, and I sprang up, and held my sword with my left hand. My right hand was no longer able to hold the sword.
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I rushed at him, and he rolled and quickly got up, parrying my blows. I swung my sword left and right, him barely able to block my attacks. I finally got him up against a tree and I aimed a final blow to his head. I swung with all my strength, but failed. He had ducked immediately after landing against the tree, and jumped at me, grabbed me around the waist, and pushed me the ground, knocking the air out of my lungs. He landed a few punches across my face, and my vision was getting blurry.
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He got up and then I heard him yell and sag against the tree.
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I felt someone rush up against my side. He grabbed me by the arms and lifted me up. It was Kid Mental. He had thrown some daggers at Ragetti, pinning him to the tree. There were several in his hands and throat.
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Kid Mental was saying something. “Where's Patrick?” he was asking me.
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I wiped the blood from my mouth with my left hand and then held my face in my hand. “He's dead.”
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Kid Mental looked shocked. “What?”
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“He's dead!” I screamed and ran toward to where I had saw Patrick. He wasn't there, but I saw Anton sprawled on the ground, a sword through his stomach. If Patrick wasn't here, was he alive?
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“Patrick!” I screamed and looked around.
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I didn't see him at all.
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Tigerlilly was leaning against a tree, a little blood coming out of her mouth. I could hear very slow breathing.
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I wanted to keep looking for Patrick, a new hope in me that he might be still alive, but I had to check on Tigerilly. I ran over to her and put my hand on her shoulder.
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“Tigerlilly, are you alright?” I asked worriedly.
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Tigerlilly slowly shook her head. “I don't… I don't kno-w-w, if I'll-l mak-e it…” she said, coughing her words.
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I peered at her wounds. They were terrible.
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She shook her head again. “Just, try-y to tie my wounds…”
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So I did as best as I could with my left hand. My right hand was beginning to throb. After I did my best, she laid onto her side.
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“Let me… rest… and if I don't make it… thanks for the fish…” she said, smiling, and her eyes closed.
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“Tigerlilly?” I said, scared. I felt for a pulse and felt one that was going very slow. “I'll be back for you,” I said.
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I walked off, ripping a piece of my shirt off to cover my hand. I looked up and saw Otaku rushing toward me, and I could see she wasn't that wounded, though she had a black eye and some blood across her arm.
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She ran over and helped me wrap my hand. “Aay, thank goodness you're alive,” she said.
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“You too,” I said.
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“Where's Patrick?” she asked.
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“I don't know… I saw him…” I struggled to get the words out without tearing a little, “I saw him lying on the ground covered in blood, but once I got over there, he was gone. So I'm thinking he's alive.”
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Otaku finished wrapping my hand. “Let's hope so.”
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“I'm going to keep looking,” I said. I pointed to Tigerlilly. “She needs help really bad,” I said.
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Otaku nodded her head and rushed to Tigerlilly.
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I believe our side had won. We didn't have that many deaths. In fact, it was only Assasin, I believe, so far.
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Whoever that was left on the other side had escaped. I could see the bodies of Li and the wizards covered in bow and arrows.
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Kid Mental had a few bruises on his face, and blood on his arm. Crimson and his friends weren't that hurt, them working as a group. Twaksak was limping toward us.
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I ran back to Otaku to ask about Assasin.
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She shook her head. “He's almost dead. He told me to go help other people. I don't know if he's alive still.”
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I nodded and ran to Assasin. I fell to my knees and inspected his wounds.
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“Who-s there-e…?” Assasin sputtered.
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“It's Aay,” I said, tears beginning to well up.
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He gave a chuckle, but it was rough, and it ended up as a cough. “I did my duty, Lady Aay, and I hope that you-u will succeed-d in you-ur ways…”
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I grabbed his hand. “I thank you, Assasin, for being my protector. I didn't talk much to you and I hardly saw you, but… Thank you…”
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“I was hon-onnored, to guard, a per-son, like you,” he mumbled and then breath left him.
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I closed my eyes and a tear came out. I then opened my eyes, put Assasin's sword in his hand, and rested it on his stomach. “Rest with Saradomin, Assasin.”
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I stood up and walked toward the others.
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I heard a crack, like a bone breaking, and I turned to see Ozzy fighting the last person. He was using Kung-fu against him, and he had broken the man's neck. He headed over here, but not before picking up a body. I looked at him sadly. It was Nick Yang. I don't think Nick Yang was dead, but he had a wound on his stomach. Megamickel survived with hardly any injuries, as had Webbuu, though he had a little wrap around his arm, which he had probably been shot with an arrow. Jack was carrying Gopher on his shoulder, whom seemed unconscious, but not dead. Silver was coming upon us as a puma and she transformed back into human and rushed over to help the wounded. Sara had stayed close to the children who couldn't do anything but watch the bloodshed. She had protected them with all her strength, and with that, none of them had been wounded. She herself didn't have that many wounds. Blitzer and Spirit were the last one coming up to us, carrying Calladus, who was passed out with a wrap around his head. Twaksak was a little ways behind them, and he was holding his arm, which appeared to be broken.
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“Where's Patrick?” Blitzer asked. I could hear the worry in his voice.
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I shook my head and was about to burst into tears.
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“I'm here.”
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I turned and saw Patrick standing there, holding his side. He was still covered in blood, and he had tons of bruises upon his arms.
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“Patrick?” I whispered, and then finally tears did come. I ran to him and gathered him in a hug, careful not to hurt his wounds.
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He coughed and tried to hug me back. He sort of sagged against me. “Aay, thank goodness you're alright,” he said. He sighed and looked at the others. “Thank you, all of you.” He looked gravely toward Assasin and whispered thank you to him.
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I inspected Patrick's wounds. He had a deep cut at his side, and his arms had little burn marks everywhere. Those must have been from the fire bolts. His face was swollen, most likely from having a fistfight with Anton or somebody else.
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Patrick started walking with an arm about my waist. He stopped in front of everyone. “We need to get to a medical center,” he said.
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Tigerlilly, who was alive and awake, said groggily, “There are none around here, Patrick.” Tigerlilly was leaning up against Otaku, who was struggling to keep her upright. Silver went over to help carry her.
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Patrick sighed. “Let's just make use of the supplies in the house,” he said.
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The rest of the day, we spent bathing wounds and tried to find some sort of bandage to wrap all the wounds. We brought Assasin on one of the beds, and we piled the rest of the beds into the biggest rooms so we could watch over all the people who were wounded. Tigerlilly, Gopher, Calladus, and Nick Yang were all on the beds, bathed and their wounds had been covered.
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The kids stayed in one room all together.
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Patrick decided that he would close his clan. He decided it was all to early for them to come to Runescape, and they would just have to come to Runescape as normal noobs and learn on Tutorial Island. Patrick had looked pained when he said all this, but he said it was for the best. He should do it.
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The rest of the people, on the other hand… They would go living on their normal lives. They would still live around here or go back to Varrock. Megamickel and Webbuu had left to find some horses to pull carts with their belongings. The ones who could teleport back were going to do that, and the ones who couldn't were just going to make the day long journey back to Varrock.
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The children were sent home, some crying when they found out it was going to be closed. But as Patrick said, it was for the best. Alica, Calina, and Pez were the most heartbroken. They were the last ones to leave, and they were the most emotional. It took them forever to leave. All the kids would give us a note to say if they arrived at their homes safely, and eventually, they all did arrive safely.
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We were all headed to Varrock not a week later, Calladus, Gopher, and Nick Yang who had all healed safely. Tigerlilly would stay there, for it was her home, and she had her own clan to co-run. Sara, Twaksak, Crimson, Lta, and Greenwolf would also be staying there too, because they also lived there. We all said an emotional goodbye to them, for we had been through a lot together.
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Now Patrick, Ozzy, Megmickel, Webbuu, Blitzer, Spirit, Silver, Kid Mental, Gopher, Calladus, Nick Yang, Jack, Otaku, and I were headed to Varrock, to home. We were all very excited about being back.
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Patrick and I talked to the King of Varrock, and he apologized for everything that happened, and he congratulated all of us for the final defeat of the clan that started with Sir Dark and Lady Scarlet, and eventually ended with Dav. Amik Varze apologized greatly for me for letting Shadow go with us and protecting me. I said it was alright, for I and him both thought that he could change.
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And now, it was just Patrick and I, walking through the bare Varrock. The sun was setting and everyone was off to bed. It had been several months since I met Patrick, and it seems like they have just sort of passed by. But I'm grateful for the days that I've spent with Patrick and the others. They became my friends, and stayed my friends even after they learned the truth.
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My face turned a deep red and I looked down at my feet. Then I gathered the courage, and looked back up to him.
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Patrick's piercing blue eyes looked questioning, and he stared intently in my eyes. “What would her answer be?”
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<font color="Black">Revan Jast: Owner of Assasin. WEEEEEE!!!!! I loved ur character!!! At then end mostly, `cause he was great. And I made, at ur request, for your character to be stabbed through the stomach instead of the heart, and he had a small sad chat with Aay. Thank you!!!!</font>
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<font color="Black">Chad: </font><font color="Black">Owner of Chadrizard. </font><font color="Black">I haven't talked to you for awhile either :tear: but I hope I will soon! I'm sorry your character wasn't really `in' here, but I hope you enjoyed the story! Thank you!</font>
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<font color="Black">For this story, Oh Dear II, I have received 103 reviews, and we might surpass the 122 reviews. But that's just a maybe, because that's a lot of people… This story is around 20, 607 words long, including all the author notes :tears: if only I didn't talk so much, I could give you a precise amount. </font>
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<font color="Black">I started Oh Dear on 01-17-06 and finished 03-15-06. It lasted not that long, didn't it? I started Oh Dear II on 03-30-06 and finished 06-10-06. :tears again: I strayed too long from it. </font>
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<font color="Black">It all started with one lady. *coughnoobcough* Her name was Aay. She survived through tragedy, through pain, through action, and through love. This time in her life, the book is closed. Yet another glance at her childhood, that book will be open. Her life has bee</font><font color="Black">n harsh, and she has learned</font><font color="Black">/still learning</font><font color="Black"> several</font><font color="Black"> thing</font><font color="Black">s</font><font color="Black">: </font><font color="Black">Try, *coughdoordonotyodasayscough* and keep trying, until you succeed. Never give up, never surrender, and when you're in trouble, turn to your friends, and learn to love life as much as possible. </font><font color="Black"></font>
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Twaksak on June 16, 2006, 7:37:04 AM

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TwaksakAWSSSOOMMEEE!!! wow woman, u are really something. I definitely think you should write more RS stories. even if they don't include Aay or Patric at all. The whole fighting scene was really something!!! The whole Mrs.Patric thing is also friggen awsome!!. So.... are there gonna be any little Patric's and Aay's running around some day??? HUH?!? Just kidding.
 
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