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Oh Dear II: A Sequel

Patrick has finally set up a place for n00bs, though its a day away from Varrock, so he and Aay hardly get to see eachother, and a new power has arisen.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 9 • views: 520

Chapter 2 - Framed
Submitted: April 8, 2006 • Updated: April 8, 2006
Word count: 1518 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 462

Chapter 3 - A Talk with the King
Submitted: April 16, 2006 • Updated: April 16, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 273

Chapter 4 - A Visit to the White Knights Castle
Submitted: April 20, 2006 • Updated: April 20, 2006
Word count: 1811 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 272

Chapter 5 - Hippity Hop
Submitted: April 28, 2006 • Updated: April 28, 2006
Word count: 1060 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 261

Chapter 6 - Stolen Banana
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: May 7, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 280

Chapter 7 - The Twist of the Tongue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2778 • Size: 34k • Comments: 1 • views: 278

Chapter 8 - Fire
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2219 • Size: 27k • Comments: 1 • views: 310

Chapter 9 - Aay's Dangerous Secret
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 28k • Comments: 0 • views: 296

Chapter 10 - Dark History
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2004 • Size: 23k • Comments: 1 • views: 257

Chapter 11 - Betrayed Again
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2855 • Size: 35k • Comments: 0 • views: 293

Chapter 12 - Scream of Fury
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2197 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 306

Chapter 13 - Final Finale
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 5057 • Size: 60k • Comments: 1 • views: 291

Chapter 14 - Epilogue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2057 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 281

Comments

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Twaksak on April 14, 2006, 6:53:40 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 1)
Twaksakalright, here it goes.
name: Twaksak (feel free to add me
Talent: well, when i run around runescape i like to find new ways of making cash, because i love expensive armour. So i mainly do mining and smithing
Weapon: rune shimmy (im not a member. its so FRUSTRATING!!!)
Armour: Addy(G) once again, i love flashy stuff
Personality: Alright, i love to make money(I love money so much that i even go around picking up 5gp at the goblins place) and wear flashy stuff. i cant stand people that wear mis coloured and mismached stuff. i love talking nonsence at the mining site. errrr, im NOT GAY!!! i take serious offence in being called gay. sheesh... and i really like ginger beer.
Appearence: tall dark and handsome.... na, just kidding, brown hair, shoulder length, no beard, give me blue eyes and wearing anything flashy!!! On a rather depressing note, i just sold my addy(T)!!! *sniffness*

alright, ill be reading ur story then. oh and say happy bday to emma watson!!!! 15/04!!

TheFallenOne66 on June 6, 2007, 11:02:15 AM

TheFallenOne66 on (Chapter: 1)
TheFallenOne66Allow me to tell u that u r GAY! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
 
 
LOL not relly. Just tempting you. XD

Twaksak on June 26, 2006, 3:44:01 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 14)
Twaksakwow, really awsome. Im glad Otaku suggested it.
OH JOY FOR THEM!!!
____________________
-o_________o-
'tis flowing with strength and vigor

Twaksak on June 16, 2006, 7:37:04 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 13)
TwaksakAWSSSOOMMEEE!!! wow woman, u are really something. I definitely think you should write more RS stories. even if they don't include Aay or Patric at all. The whole fighting scene was really something!!! The whole Mrs.Patric thing is also friggen awsome!!. So.... are there gonna be any little Patric's and Aay's running around some day??? HUH?!? Just kidding.
 
Keep on keeping on

Rancor125 on June 7, 2006, 2:00:38 PM

Rancor125 on (Chapter: 10)
Rancor125Um... I'll die. :( lol... Can it be dramatic? PLZ? Just asking.
 
Im Ragetti, just reminding u.
 
RR

Twaksak on June 2, 2006, 7:28:16 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 8)
TwaksakCOOL COOL COOOOOL!!!!!! the whole burning thing and all the fire and that -person- shadow, definitely awsome!!!!

Twaksak on May 26, 2006, 3:28:11 PM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 7)
TwaksakHee Hee Hee!!!
Twist of the tongue, teeth and the lips
do thyn wish to challenge my AWSOME TONGUE TWISTING POWERS!!!!!
MWAHAHHAHAHA!!!
This chapter was really something =)

Twaksak on May 8, 2006, 4:38:40 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 6)
Twaksakok, from a beautiful South African language called Afrikaans. It goes as such "Sannie sê Sarel sal sewe sakke sout sleep, sewe sakke sout is swaar so waar."

Translated "Sannie says that Sarel will drag seven bags of salt, seven bags of salt are really heavy."

DONT DISS AFRIKAANS!!!!!!!!

shadowdude on April 20, 2006, 7:43:19 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 4)
shadowdude"oh, and Shadow, would you mind if I did make your character evil later on?"

answer: as long as you DONT turn me into a saradominist (or guthan), and i get a shot at fighting patrik (win or loose) fine by me. although when i decide to pk (mainly sara's in cwars (members thing) or in wildy) i wear different stuff, full black mystic, a complete zammy prayer book, and a zammy staff. i swicth between aincent and normal magic, but i mainly use normal for flames of zammy. I also use iban staff for iban blast. so remember, if you do make me evil, thats my evil armor an wep.

Twaksak on April 19, 2006, 3:40:09 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 3)
TwaksakWOOPA!!!! thrilling episode!! Yeah, make quick with the next one. I CANT WAIT!!!!! *runs to wall at top speed and startd banging head to the tune of 'old mac donald'*