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Oh Dear III

Aay and Patrick have been married eight months, and yet danger kees on coming their way. Someone from Aay's past shows up, and this time, Aay's life will be in danger. What a way to ruin the Christmas season!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prologue
Submitted: October 12, 2006 • Updated: October 12, 2006
Word count: 2016 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 257

Chapter 2 - Christmas Thoughts
Submitted: October 12, 2006 • Updated: October 12, 2006
Word count: 1690 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 212

Chapter 3 - Dreaded Conversation
Submitted: October 12, 2006 • Updated: October 12, 2006
Word count: 1253 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 243

Chapter 4 - Plans
Submitted: October 12, 2006 • Updated: October 12, 2006
Word count: 2022 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 265

Comments

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TheFallenOne66 on June 3, 2007, 6:48:04 AM

TheFallenOne66 on (Chapter: 4)
TheFallenOne66Very good. Very good indeed. Try to finish it; I need to know what happens. I'm mkaing a story called "The Cursed Clan". It comes off a little from this story. You inspired me to continue writing, so for that, I begin writing "Runescape III, Rise of the Cursed Clan"!

Mustard_Girl on June 4, 2007, 5:58:21 AM

Mustard_Girl on (Chapter: 4)
Mustard_Girl^_^ Thank, it's already completed, though um... I never finished posting it here =O I'll check out your story sometime!

shadowdude on October 14, 2006, 7:56:53 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 4)
shadowdudeno need to say it, you probably know...

TheFallenOne66 on June 3, 2007, 6:54:32 AM

TheFallenOne66 on (Chapter: 4)
TheFallenOne66Be ashamed. Be very ashamed. in my next story, Patrick is nearly invincible! HE KILLS ALL! Excapt Samus's father, Gale. He's blessed with every inch of Zamorak's power, almost making him Zamorak. Weird, isn't it?

shadowdude on October 14, 2006, 7:56:22 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 3)
shadowdudeu guessed it, gr8 story and kill patrick

shadowdude on October 14, 2006, 7:55:57 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 2)
shadowdudeagain, kool story, and again, die patrick!

shadowdude on October 14, 2006, 7:55:39 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 1)
shadowdudewoo gr8 story, vote to kill patrick!

shadowdude on October 14, 2006, 7:55:08 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: index)
shadowdudewoo first comment, kool up to so far...i want patrick to die! lol.