Soft Whisperings
Submitted October 6, 2005 Updated November 7, 2005 Status Incomplete | In a world of war between races, 12 year old Tomoki sets off on a journey to save his brother. Joining with many others of different kinds and with different aims, they must work with each other to try and achieve what they wish.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - In a lonely village...
Submitted: October 6, 2005 • Updated: October 6, 2005
Word count: 1700 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 235
Chapter 2 - Promises
Submitted: November 7, 2005 • Updated: November 7, 2005
Word count: 3364 • Size: 17k • Comments: 7 • views: 294
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Tillyenna on December 13, 2005, 2:56:09 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 2)
Tillyenna on December 13, 2005, 2:49:16 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 1)
Tomoki sounds cute.......tis good storyEoara on November 10, 2005, 5:04:52 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 2)
ok, so you wanted me to leave a long comment, eh?well, for a start Echospheramy's name is so long and hard to pronounce. heh. but it is a good story.
well, i like it.
a bit dark, but not depressing.
grrr...will write more later.
angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 8, 2005, 11:05:37 PM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 2)
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! IT IS SO GOOD! I can't leave a long comment as have to go to maths in a tic, but it was AMAZING!!!!! Soooooooooooooo cool!!!! Okies Doofus, see you later. Great chapter, I demand you write more as soon as you get home!!! Okies doof, bye lolNemya on November 8, 2005, 5:20:30 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 2)
No... The longer comment the better x3I love recieving long comments.
Eoara on November 8, 2005, 5:16:08 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 2)
tyres bon melly....and ani's comment is WAY TOO LONG...anyway....its very good. and you better write mor.e and you are not shootty at writing. anyhow. very goodwhatto
pip-pip
Eoara on October 22, 2005, 8:06:33 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 1)
thats really good...i really like it. Will you write more soon....pwease....pwease....pwease.!?!?!?!?!angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 6, 2005, 6:59:12 AM
angel_of_beauty_and_light on (Chapter: 1)
;___; MEL! THAT IS SOOOO AMAZING! YOU ARE SO AMAZING AT WRITING! NEVER SAY YOU ARE BAD AT WRITING STORIES AGAIN!Waa! I love it so much! I am going to be as obsessed about this as you are about my story. So there! I will leave as long comments as I can too, just to annoy you!
Anyway, it is soooooooooooooooo good! And so sad! Why did they kill him! I thought everybody liked him! Waaaaaa ;___; Sooooo sad.
You HAVE to write more! It is so good! Please please please please please please please write more soon! Otherwise I will get story deprival! So, yeah, write some more soon! Pleeease *begs* *worships* *builds a shrine to you* *builds a temple to you*
this is gooooooood story
sad but cool