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Chapter 2 - Memory

These are some short poems I wrote. I think they're pretty good. The first ones a little scary but thats what you get when you mix koolaid and soda. enjoy.

Chapter 2 - Memory

Chapter 2 - Memory
Note: This is a poem from BBs point of view talking about the moment at the end of The Beast with In


Memory
Im lying here, in my bed
One thought keeps running through my head.
One bitter sweet memory
of me and you, you and me
We were looking out into the sea
For a moment we were meant to be
I was upset but you cheered me up
Then I joked around
you said you had enough
I dont know if god could hear me
But I prayed that youd always be near me
and you didnt leave...


*It sounds good if you read it really fast and then slow down on the last line.

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toxic_dreamer on January 1, 2006, 12:55:37 PM

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toxic_dreamerDUDE....those poems were awesome.....I LUV IT....really...i'm in 'awe' .....and i honestly can't think of the right words to describe it.....but thnx for the great read....^_^....keep up the good work

RavenGothGirl on May 11, 2005, 9:03:28 AM

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RavenGothGirli love it! i love the love theme you used in this one and the last keep on writing! mehbeh one day you'll be a fameous poem writer....

girlinpink2 on January 15, 2005, 10:46:47 AM

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girlinpink2It sounds good read slow or fast. Very good. I saw that episode, and the poem ties in very well. I love the rhyming scheme, once again. Very good ^_^!