Ray and BB poems
Submitted January 8, 2005 Updated January 9, 2005 Status Incomplete | These are some short poems I wrote. I think they're pretty good. The first ones a little scary but thats what you get when you mix koolaid and soda. enjoy.
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Chapter 1 - The Reason That I breathe
Submitted: January 8, 2005 • Updated: January 8, 2005
Word count: 117 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 275
Chapter 2 - Memory
Submitted: January 9, 2005 • Updated: January 9, 2005
Word count: 117 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 257
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toxic_dreamer on January 1, 2006, 12:55:37 PM
toxic_dreamer on (Chapter: 2)
DUDE....those poems were awesome.....I LUV IT....really...i'm in 'awe' .....and i honestly can't think of the right words to describe it.....but thnx for the great read....^_^....keep up the good workTerraShallDie on September 25, 2005, 2:42:37 AM
TerraShallDie on (Chapter: 1)
Awwwww....thats so sweet...+favs
RavenGothGirl on May 11, 2005, 9:03:28 AM
RavenGothGirl on (Chapter: 2)
i love it! i love the love theme you used in this one and the last keep on writing! mehbeh one day you'll be a fameous poem writer....RavenGothGirl on May 11, 2005, 9:01:51 AM
RavenGothGirl on (Chapter: 1)
i dont think tis scary either...i really like it tis very good it's like true love too like how one feels when they fall into a deep deep love(dudes, i can totally relate!). and if this is the result of KoolAid and Soda then im going food shopping!lolz but have you ever tried SODA and POP ROX!?girlinpink2 on January 15, 2005, 10:46:47 AM
girlinpink2 on (Chapter: 2)
It sounds good read slow or fast. Very good. I saw that episode, and the poem ties in very well. I love the rhyming scheme, once again. Very good ^_^!girlinpink2 on January 15, 2005, 10:41:19 AM
girlinpink2 on (Chapter: 1)
I don't think it's creepy at all. I find it very beautiful. Lovely poem. I like the rhyming scheme as well. Very good job! ^_^