Story of Nightgirl
Submitted June 14, 2005 Updated January 23, 2008 Status Complete | this is a story abuot a mutant that comes to this dimension(a dimension is a world that exist beside our world) Think im going to rewrite this yo someday when i got time, add a few things ya know.
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - How it all started, part 1
Submitted: June 14, 2005 • Updated: June 14, 2005
Word count: 156 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 192
Chapter 2 - part 2
Submitted: June 15, 2005 • Updated: June 15, 2005
Word count: 259 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 200
Chapter 3 - part 3
Submitted: June 14, 2005 • Updated: June 14, 2005
Word count: 379 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 225
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brinabunny on January 25, 2007, 7:58:59 AM
brinabunny on (Chapter: 3)
This is good. Very good but (no offence to you) i think you need to add detail and add more to it.