Hope In a Heartbreak
Submitted November 27, 2006 Updated December 30, 2006 Status Complete | Ash and co.are spending the weekend in Cinnabar Island & meet a kid named Derek who sweeps Misty off her feet causing Ash to get jealous , But Derek isn't who he seems,can Ash convince Misty of the truth or is she going to have to see for her self?
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - A New City, A New Friend?
Submitted: November 27, 2006 • Updated: November 29, 2006
Word count: 879 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 529
Chapter 2 - Tour of the City
Submitted: November 28, 2006 • Updated: November 28, 2006
Word count: 876 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 499
Chapter 3 - Questions and Answers
Submitted: December 3, 2006 • Updated: December 3, 2006
Word count: 1569 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 513
Chapter 4 - Trouble in Paradise
Submitted: December 6, 2006 • Updated: December 6, 2006
Word count: 2879 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 483
Chapter 5 - Secret Revalations
Submitted: December 12, 2006 • Updated: December 12, 2006
Word count: 3358 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 1044
Chapter 6 - My Love and Savior
Submitted: December 17, 2006 • Updated: December 18, 2006
Word count: 7130 • Size: 36k • Comments: 5 • views: 595
Chapter 7 - *Alternate Ending*
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 996 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 459
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Dragondash on May 1, 2008, 10:03:35 PM
Dragondash on (Chapter: index)
That was cool! And Misty IS older than Ash. Everyone knows that. So why are everyone here so surprised?PPhantom on May 2, 2008, 8:58:45 AM
PPhantom on (Chapter: index)
yeah it bugs me when people point that outits fanfiction people!!
taijutsumaster on June 27, 2007, 10:58:08 AM
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DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!! ur stories are friggen awesomePPhantom on June 27, 2007, 12:35:19 PM
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thank you =]Anne14 on May 18, 2007, 1:21:52 PM
Anne14 on (Chapter: 2)
OMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!PPhantom on May 18, 2007, 2:34:31 PM
PPhantom on (Chapter: 2)
im glad u like it, all the chapters are up. and yes i know mistys older than ash but i just made it so she wasntAnne14 on May 18, 2007, 1:14:26 PM
Anne14 on (Chapter: 1)
ahhhhhhhh mistys like older than ash..... but still goodOMG!!!Awesome!!!*favs* *favs* Very detailed. yeah and PLEASE do it quickly!!! I really loooooooooooove this story! OMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!
shinypikachu2608 on May 5, 2007, 3:56:37 AM
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ahhhhhhhh mistys like older than ash.....but still good
Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:37:45 AM
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I'll read and the other stories of yours!!!^^PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:43:36 AM
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thank u!Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:10:51 AM
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Why do you write so freaking awesome stories???!!!!*favs*
PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:33:39 AM
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lol its not that good but thanks anyway =]Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:33:35 AM
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So....so....Awesome!!!I love it!!!^^Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:01:21 AM
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OMG!!Can you believe that I cry now???*sobs*I really do!!!
PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:33:24 AM
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lol im sorry!!*hands u box of 2 ply tissue*Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:20:45 AM
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So sad!!!!*sobs*Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 5:55:12 AM
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OMG!!!Awesome!!!*favs**favs*
PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 5:59:23 AM
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yay thanks for the favs =Dkatara719 on January 2, 2007, 3:51:18 AM
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I like this one and the Other! The other was a little more romantic, which i loved, but this one makes Derek not a jerk. Still, very excellent story!~katara
PPhantom on January 2, 2007, 8:06:21 AM
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i liked the first one cause im a just a romantic good but yes i felt bad for derek so i did a little twist on it =] im in a contest for ash and misty love fiction and im debating which to enter with, hope in a heartbreak, or blast from the past-wat d u think?katara719 on January 7, 2007, 1:38:20 AM
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hmm... maybe "Hope in Heartbreak." They're both very Very good, but I like this one a little tiny bit more. ^^~katara
PPhantom on January 8, 2007, 5:48:29 AM
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yeah me too thanks ^_^SaraJane on December 30, 2006, 11:39:22 PM
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Wow, Great Job! It is a good story! Well done!-SaraJane
Coolstra on December 24, 2006, 12:12:25 AM
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This was so awesome! I love love stories! *faves*
wolf-girl-ghost on December 19, 2006, 12:23:30 AM
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WHOOT AWESOME THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV STORIES EVER!Ur a really good writer and I hope to see more fanfics from you in future long lice AAML
katara719 on December 18, 2006, 7:58:39 AM
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hey, i was wondering if i could put a link to this story on my profile so (maybe) more people will read it? this is a really good story, and it deserves more comments. ^^ i promise i'll say it's your story. i won't put it there if you don't want me to. thank you if you let me. =D~katara
PPhantom on December 18, 2006, 7:59:29 AM
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omg yes thanks so much that would be great! wow ur like my fricken hero!*bows down*katara719 u rock so much!
katara719 on December 18, 2006, 8:08:27 AM
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^^ yay! i'll add it to my profile right away! ^^~katara
katara719 on December 18, 2006, 7:16:51 AM
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AWESOME STORY! IT HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVORITES! ^^really, really well done. ^^
thank you for writing this story. it's a really good love story (with my second favorite couple) and it's not actually cheesy.
~katara
PPhantom on December 18, 2006, 7:57:34 AM
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yay thanks so much im so hapy u like it and put it under ur favs. i know like 80% of AMML r so cheesy or so predictable and thanks so much for following it and thanks for not calling it cheezy(swips forheard phew)THANK U THANK U THANK U!!
katara719 on December 15, 2006, 8:00:02 AM
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i need to say, i'm touched with the last one.~katara
PPhantom on December 15, 2006, 8:04:45 AM
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yay im glad. the final chapter is coming out this weekend, be prepared lolkatara719 on December 16, 2006, 7:45:18 AM
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awesome, i can't wait! ^^~katara
Sasukesgirlfriend on December 12, 2006, 9:20:35 AM
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Very detailed.katara719 on December 10, 2006, 6:40:14 AM
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yay i love thes stories!~katara
PPhantom on December 10, 2006, 8:27:16 AM
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im glad someone finally commented and yay that u like it!freewilly on November 28, 2006, 2:38:02 AM
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yeah and PLEASE do it quickly!!!i really loooooooooooove this story!
wolf-girl-ghost on November 28, 2006, 1:00:08 AM
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OMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!