Chronicles of a New Titan

Once again rob and star 4 ever! anywho, great chapter once again! I'm gonna read the next one now!

Awesome! i really like the words u chosed to make the story more intresting. i like how there is a new character and every thing, i think i know where this is going. rob and star 4 ever! no offense

I still have more chapters to write, but I tink it will take a while. I'm nearing the end of 8th grade so I'll wait until summer. Only about a week.

I'm not done yet.

wow!! very nice ending. not lame at all!

okies half of ur request is done and posted but it's not the best cause of the sensetive paint program^^

hehe! i can really relate to holly!! i think you're a really good author. write more fanfics ^-^;; *adds to favs*

o my gosh i like this chapter the best so far!! and Holly kinda reminds me of my self lolz cuz partially what she said about her dad.....my dad is a totaly j@ck@$$ and i hate him and he's really mean and yea you get the picture. his mom too.so when she said stuffz about her dad, i totally felt the connection. i also like the crying. i dunno why, but i always like crying and kissing. i thinx i like crying because it makes the other person feel bad and then they kiss you and it's all romantic. or they just hold you for a long time. or they wanna protect you or something. i love romance too, and this might turn out to be a pretty romantic story! humor is alwayz good too.sometimes.yeaa.....anyway i really wouldnt know about the crying thing. i mean, i dont even cry when my dad&grandma yell at me in the worst ways and make me totally ubeerly upset, so if i can withstand that $hi+, then i dont think i can cry that much. i mean, even in gym class about a month ago some kid literally plowed me over when we were doing this running exersise, and even though my large wounds on my elbow and knee were dark purple (a beautiful shade) in less than 30 seconds, not a tear fell from my eyes that day. i can get emotionally hurt, though. some dayz when i have fights with my dad and/or gradnma in the morning, ill sit in my room at night and write depressing poems and be very sad.any way that has nnot much to do with this so GREAT JOB ::D
~btw, Rae&Holly both have issues with their fathers...any chance they could become like really good frinds or w/e?~

i like this story so far (i usually try to wait till the last chapter to review it all but i cant take the chance of you not finishing an awesomely writtan story!) i like the different POVz i hope BB getz Holly!

wow!! this is a great story!!
i really like your character and how she's all mysterious like me. hehe!!