Mouse Block A
Submitted March 17, 2004 Updated March 22, 2004 Status Incomplete | Alright, I know the title is dumb but hey, im only 11. Anyway its a good story. At least I think so.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Where am I?
Submitted: March 17, 2004 • Updated: March 17, 2004
Word count: 590 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 187
Chapter 2 - Episode 2
Submitted: March 22, 2004 • Updated: March 22, 2004
Word count: 269 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 178
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Possessed_Hamster_Queen on April 11, 2004, 5:02:37 AM
Possessed_Hamster_Queen on (Chapter: 2)
PLEASE COMMENT!!!silver_dreams on April 11, 2004, 2:10:21 AM
silver_dreams on (Chapter: 1)
it's not bad, try to use more descriptive words than just the same one over and ober. and maybe u shuldn't use 'knocked out' too much, ya kno? Dun try and use 'i'm only 11' as an excuse to just give it only 50%of ur talent, i'm 12 and have a novel that may soon be published. I can tell you have some serious writing talent, you just gotta not be afraid to give it your all!Heehee funky names.
Possessed_Hamster_Queen on March 17, 2004, 11:51:11 AM
Possessed_Hamster_Queen on (Chapter: 1)
I know this is a really crappy story but hey. i did my best.