the dark path

Chapter 1 - The Dark Path
Submitted: July 7, 2003 • Updated: July 7, 2003
Word count: 100 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 196

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GenisSage13 on August 14, 2005, 2:26:40 PM

GenisSage13 on August 14, 2005, 2:26:40 PM (Chapter: 1)

I understand your poetry very much... This poem sounds a lot like me life...

crazyart on January 20, 2005, 10:35:13 AM

crazyart on January 20, 2005, 10:35:13 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow this is pretty good! very depressing

Akien on August 10, 2004, 2:29:12 AM

Akien on August 10, 2004, 2:29:12 AM (Chapter: 1)

If you come up with a tune for that you could make it into a song!Good work!

Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on July 25, 2003, 9:02:24 PM

Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on July 25, 2003, 9:02:24 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow i really like this..its so good it also describes me ^-^