C'mon Lets Go
Submitted November 5, 2003 Updated November 5, 2003 Status Incomplete | heh i was bored (what else is new) but i like it >^-^< its 'sposed ta be some-what up lifting. comment if u please.
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Chapter 1 - C'mon Lets Go
Submitted: November 5, 2003 • Updated: November 5, 2003
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rikkuXsora on January 20, 2005, 9:34:56 AM
rikkuXsora on (Chapter: 1)
That is very very good!!!!! Think you could look at some of my poems.Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 2:55:25 PM
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Very nice imagery =) It would amke a very nice song, like the other person said, and I like how you show several different places. The end was a bit quick though!tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 5:53:35 PM
tiler_james on (Chapter: 1)
me likey! XD This could be made into a song! ^-^Sakura_Sagara on November 19, 2003, 11:59:51 PM
Sakura_Sagara on (Chapter: 1)
nice poem. I draw in Spanish! ^^