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Alice's wish

Alice,a 15year old girl,born with an illness,finds a 4-leaf clover right in front of her boyfriend's cafe.when she wishes for her illness to be cured,she ends up lost in another demention,plus in this new demention her illness is taking over her body.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - new dimension
Submitted: January 13, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
Word count: 940 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 254

Chapter 2 - FullMetal Alchemist
Submitted: February 20, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
Word count: 2029 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 209

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TheBestDamnThing on July 9, 2007, 3:09:39 AM

TheBestDamnThing on (Chapter: 1)
TheBestDamnThingTHIS IS GOOD!

SailorBunnyAlchemist on July 9, 2007, 3:14:59 AM

SailorBunnyAlchemist on (Chapter: 1)
SailorBunnyAlchemistthank you, i'm glad you liked it, i'm still working on the next chapter, but i'm having trouble, so it might be a while till i get the next chapter up

LucreChan on January 17, 2007, 7:37:45 AM

LucreChan on (Chapter: 1)
LucreChanThat one sentence "Lily is 10 years old and really persistent" is out of place. It should belong in the next paragraph, when you introduce Lily. Otherwise, your story has a great beginning! I hope you post some more chapters up soon!