Concocting a Love Potion (Writing Exercise)
Submitted May 22, 2008 Updated May 22, 2008 Status Complete | It was a daily writing exercise to which I had to write a short story of true love. I had to include dialog, make them kiss, and mess with their mind. I didn't so much mess with their minds, but I want to know what you think.
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Chapter 1 - Concocting a Love Potion (Writing Exercise)
Submitted: May 22, 2008 • Updated: May 22, 2008
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zerotimberwolf on May 22, 2008, 9:14:37 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 1)
Its pretty good...but needs a little more depth, I'd give it a high BSasukesChick on May 23, 2008, 7:20:22 AM
SasukesChick on (Chapter: 1)
thanks as i said, it was an exercise so i didn't go too deep. i like how it had turned out, that's why i posted it, so i may turn it into a story. i'm not really sure. at the end of each chapter, in which all the exercises are complete, i have to create one big work from all the exercises so i may post the final up.zerotimberwolf on May 23, 2008, 7:32:31 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
That would look great