Retaliation
Submitted January 22, 2005 Updated January 22, 2005 Status Incomplete | The Dark Empire begins to assemble their forces in great numbers. Their goal, to conquer the entire Anime Universe.
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Chapter 1 - Retaliation: The Three Excellencies Take Charge
Submitted: January 22, 2005 • Updated: January 22, 2005
Word count: 2566 • Size: 14k • Comments: 3 • views: 911
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SoraYamato on October 6, 2006, 8:04:50 PM
SoraYamato on (Chapter: index)
ShadowDragon2 on August 25, 2006, 2:48:08 PM
ShadowDragon2 on (Chapter: 1)
Very interesting. Great job!Cara on January 26, 2005, 4:14:03 AM
Cara on (Chapter: 1)
Ok so thats what it means. Awesome job.MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 24, 2005, 3:36:54 AM
MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on (Chapter: 1)
its just amazing how u can make ur own characters and language, u even made a whole saga as if u were the one who created the anime, ur stories and pics rock, i must admit u r better than me, u r the best , keep it up! see ya!P.S: i got more pics submitted and i would appreciate comments on it thanx,see ya!
Cavendish has great public speaking skills. Any debating team would want him for his ability to create a good argument regardless which side of the argument they must take. Your use of imagery creates a chilling picture painted in greys and military strictness that sends a shiver up the spine and makes one dread the inevitable battle that will surely endanger our heroes.
Very interesting plot development.
Keep up the good work