Team H.A.K.

Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Submitted: September 2, 2007 • Updated: April 12, 2008
Word count: 381 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 955

Chapter 1 - Dreams of New Beginnings
Submitted: September 2, 2007 • Updated: October 12, 2008
Word count: 5567 • Size: 29k • Comments: 5 • views: 208

Chapter 2 - What a B#tch!
Submitted: April 11, 2008 • Updated: April 21, 2008
Word count: 6970 • Size: 36k • Comments: 2 • views: 163

Chapter 3 - Escape...~PART ONE~
Submitted: August 24, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 5675 • Size: 30k • Comments: 3 • views: 110

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ruleruben on April 10, 2011, 12:37:50 AM

ruleruben on April 10, 2011, 12:37:50 AM (Chapter: index)

pretty awesome

Tinner1214 on March 17, 2009, 11:00:29 AM

Tinner1214 on March 17, 2009, 11:00:29 AM (Chapter: 3)

...no air?

Tinner1214 on March 17, 2009, 11:13:46 AM

Tinner1214 on March 17, 2009, 11:13:46 AM (Chapter: 3)

Aweszomez BTW

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:22:12 AM

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 8:22:12 AM (Chapter: 1)

OMFG!!!! I never knew you could write stories s well!!

I like teh Axel..... :3

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 10:09:29 AM

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 25, 2008, 10:09:29 AM (Chapter: 1)

Aw, really? He's pretty plain XD
Thank you so much for your time! Is there anything you think I could improve on?

MrGimp on August 25, 2008, 1:41:18 AM

MrGimp on August 25, 2008, 1:41:18 AM (Chapter: 3)

this chapter is amazing! So much suspense... You really know a way to explain even the most tiniest detail! Amazing job, keep 'em coming! >w<

Flashthehedgehog on May 19, 2008, 11:43:00 PM

Flashthehedgehog on May 19, 2008, 11:43:00 PM (Chapter: 2)

Wow A + for your attention to detail once again SG. I like your detail about what is blantantly an ipod lol.

MrGimp on April 11, 2008, 7:32:48 PM

MrGimp on April 11, 2008, 7:32:48 PM (Chapter: 2)

Oh whoa, this story is so detailed like your other story! I likes!!! >w<

I never thought Hana would be like that! XD

A great story and you got me hooked. Now i shall sit in the corner patiently waiting for the next chappie! >w<

Sutaru on September 3, 2007, 5:15:27 AM

Sutaru on September 3, 2007, 5:15:27 AM (Chapter: index)

AWESOME!!! do you add characters?

Flashthehedgehog on September 2, 2007, 10:22:40 PM

Flashthehedgehog on September 2, 2007, 10:22:40 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow, so much attention to detail. Axel is certainly a taker with the ladies lol just kidding. Fantastic start to your new story

Flashthehedgehog on September 2, 2007, 9:15:11 PM

Flashthehedgehog on September 2, 2007, 9:15:11 PM (Chapter: index)

Awesome prologue very one to one. Great job

MrGimp on September 2, 2007, 9:07:54 PM

MrGimp on September 2, 2007, 9:07:54 PM (Chapter: 1)

oh whoa, this is getting good! More pwease! >w<

MrGimp on September 2, 2007, 8:38:33 PM

MrGimp on September 2, 2007, 8:38:33 PM (Chapter: index)

O_o

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OH YEAH!! D00d!!! That's what im talking about!! Im hooked already! Kick @$$ prologue!!! *flies to next chappie*