The First Meet

Chapter 1 - Lost But Found?
Submitted: November 2, 2006 • Updated: November 2, 2006
Word count: 499 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 401

Chapter 2 - Whata whata who
Submitted: November 2, 2006 • Updated: November 2, 2006
Word count: 509 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 351

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sparkiestar on January 9, 2007, 4:57:13 AM

sparkiestar on January 9, 2007, 4:57:13 AM (Chapter: index)

im enjoying the story so far.plz continue

Sonicxgrl11 on December 17, 2006, 9:31:50 AM

Sonicxgrl11 on December 17, 2006, 9:31:50 AM (Chapter: 2)

i like it write more :D

TallestPurple on December 5, 2006, 6:57:37 AM

TallestPurple on December 5, 2006, 6:57:37 AM (Chapter: 2)

*waits fur next chapter* 0_0 Anyhow I love it so far :D

TallestPurple on December 5, 2006, 6:54:44 AM

TallestPurple on December 5, 2006, 6:54:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

Nice work!! *goes to read next chapter*

Love2talk11 on December 4, 2006, 8:41:01 AM

Love2talk11 on December 4, 2006, 8:41:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

awesome!!!

V1k on November 26, 2006, 6:27:01 AM

V1k on November 26, 2006, 6:27:01 AM (Chapter: 2)

NEAT!

V1k on November 26, 2006, 6:26:41 AM

V1k on November 26, 2006, 6:26:41 AM (Chapter: 1)

Kool! Keep Going! XP

Tachzaruu on November 24, 2006, 4:31:33 AM

Tachzaruu on November 24, 2006, 4:31:33 AM (Chapter: 2)

well, i fink that speechmarks and spellcheck might make it easier to read, but besides that, its good so far, and your good at building up suspense.

Karannah on November 2, 2006, 4:21:16 AM

Karannah on November 2, 2006, 4:21:16 AM (Chapter: 1)

cool story so far!!!