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A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE

*WARNING*
THIS DREAM HAS VIOLENCE, AND GORY. IF YOU GET EASILY UPSET OR NAUSEATED THIS MAY NOT BE THE BEST THING FOR YOU TO READ 
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Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
Submitted: December 18, 2006 • Updated: December 18, 2006
Word count: 391 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 428

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power9x on August 18, 2007, 1:07:36 PM

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power9xWell, I know this isn't really a fic, so I can't really review it, but its your writing, so here it goes:
1/5 (Meh)

First of all, if it's scary, describe MORE GORE and make it a higher violence rating. Second, this deserves a moderate violence. No blood= Mild, Blood= Moderate, Limb from Limb Screach Wreching Gore= Explicit. Third of all, it's too short and not detailed enough. Just follow these three tips. Flesh it out, Pull more people's flesh out, Put a higher rating of flesh on it. Fleshy de flesh flesh,
Aidan Flesh Aenima

SkyGirl on August 18, 2007, 1:43:04 PM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: 1)
SkyGirlthis is a real dream i didn't make it up

power9x on August 18, 2007, 2:12:05 PM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xI know that. I was reviewing how you wrote the dream. If you don't want to add more to it, then fine, but still, elaborate and edit it a bit.

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 3:52:57 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101okay whatcha up to

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 8:06:13 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101Gaara:what are you two talking about

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:25:28 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101thats right what were we talking about yesterday?(I dont know I think the comments thing is a bug or something)

SkyGirl on August 7, 2007, 7:33:26 AM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: index)
SkyGirlu liking naruto

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 3:47:37 AM

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tallestpurple101hi again

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:51:43 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101now I remeber o.o'

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:41:45 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101oh.............yeah 0o'

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 3:50:14 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101whoa scary anyway Jess we can still comment on stories okay comment back on my story Kitten when you get this

chiros_girl133 on April 15, 2007, 12:05:30 AM

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chiros_girl133Wow...i've had triple dreams like love2talk11 and dreams where I couldn't wake up! This was scary...

halo6 on February 21, 2007, 11:05:31 AM

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halo6ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(hides under sheets)
 
 
 
(oops)
 
 
 
lol i hate nightmares to

Kimikoprincesspancho on February 19, 2007, 10:45:41 PM

Kimikoprincesspancho on (Chapter: 1)
KimikoprincesspanchoI hate nightmares!

sparkiestar on January 9, 2007, 4:55:30 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 1)
sparkiestari hate those kinda dreams they scares me...
*sits in corner*never get double dreams.if i had that dream i would of woke up screaming.

Love2talk11 on December 28, 2006, 11:00:07 AM

Love2talk11 on (Chapter: 1)
Love2talk11i hate those dreams.
I once had a triple dream when i was very sick it was so outta control!!! 

vesblondie on December 25, 2006, 11:44:12 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 1)
vesblondie>< I HATE THOSE DREAMS!!!! they weird me out....THAT'S ONE WEIRD NIGHTMARE!!!! D:

SkyGirl on December 25, 2006, 12:19:34 PM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: 1)
SkyGirlI WOKE UP SHOCKED IT WAS BAD I NEARLY CRYIED BUT I WAS
MENTALY TO SAD FOR SOME RESONE I FEEL THEY CONTACT ME IN MY
DREAMS BECAUSE IF I HAVE A DREAM ITS ALWAYS ABOUT XIAOLIN SHOWDOWN NOTHING ELSE.

FluffleMuffin on December 25, 2006, 3:14:28 AM

FluffleMuffin on (Chapter: 1)
FluffleMuffinO_O I hate those dreams! That's really scary.
One time I had this really strange dream where I was running. I wass trying to wake up, but then I just fell back to sleep. It happened over and over again! It freaked me out. :[

SkyGirl on December 25, 2006, 7:56:30 AM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: 1)
SkyGirlwow that really sucks what i do when that happens is think
of my cartoon crushand i usually have good dreams or no
dreams

FluffleMuffin on January 10, 2007, 8:33:06 AM

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FluffleMuffinThat works for me, too!
I always think up a boring, pointless, mushy love story to help myself go to sleep. Works everytime.
Then i'll have some ridiculously strange (but often funny) dream.
lol.
I'll tell you one if you'd like.

SkyGirl on January 10, 2007, 8:35:26 AM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: index)
SkyGirlokay cool sure i am all ears

InvaderEztheGothic on December 20, 2006, 10:50:11 PM

InvaderEztheGothic on (Chapter: 1)
InvaderEztheGothic*favz* NOW THAT is a nitemare! I hate double dreams!

laurelrokz on December 18, 2006, 10:23:11 AM

laurelrokz on (Chapter: 1)
laurelrokzOMG!!!!If hailey read this she would flip.

SkyGirl on December 18, 2006, 10:24:29 AM

SkyGirl on (Chapter: 1)
SkyGirlwho is hailey do i know her i call every one by their fax names.

laurelrokz on December 18, 2006, 10:27:21 AM

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laurelrokzShe is Invaderleroy.
I call her Waffles.I'm Pancakes, Mira's Milk.WE ARE FOODTACULAR!!!!!

SkyGirl on December 18, 2006, 10:29:41 AM

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SkyGirlcool tell all your friends i write storys and stuff nobody reads my work most of the time.