A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
Submitted December 18, 2006 Updated December 18, 2006 Status Complete | *WARNING* THIS DREAM HAS VIOLENCE, AND GORY. IF YOU GET EASILY UPSET OR NAUSEATED THIS MAY NOT BE THE BEST THING FOR YOU TO READ thank you for Reading this important message.
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Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
Submitted: December 18, 2006 • Updated: December 18, 2006
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power9x on August 18, 2007, 1:07:36 PM
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SkyGirl on August 18, 2007, 1:43:04 PM
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this is a real dream i didn't make it uppower9x on August 18, 2007, 2:12:05 PM
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I know that. I was reviewing how you wrote the dream. If you don't want to add more to it, then fine, but still, elaborate and edit it a bit.tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 3:52:57 AM
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okay whatcha up totallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 8:06:13 AM
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Gaara:what are you two talking abouttallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:25:28 AM
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thats right what were we talking about yesterday?(I dont know I think the comments thing is a bug or something)SkyGirl on August 7, 2007, 7:33:26 AM
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u liking narutotallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 3:47:37 AM
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hi againtallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:51:43 AM
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now I remeber o.o'tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 7:41:45 AM
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oh.............yeah 0o'tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 3:50:14 AM
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whoa scary anyway Jess we can still comment on stories okay comment back on my story Kitten when you get thischiros_girl133 on April 15, 2007, 12:05:30 AM
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Wow...i've had triple dreams like love2talk11 and dreams where I couldn't wake up! This was scary...halo6 on February 21, 2007, 11:05:31 AM
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(hides under sheets)(oops)
lol i hate nightmares to
Kimikoprincesspancho on February 19, 2007, 10:45:41 PM
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I hate nightmares!sparkiestar on January 9, 2007, 4:55:30 AM
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i hate those kinda dreams they scares me...*sits in corner*never get double dreams.if i had that dream i would of woke up screaming.
Love2talk11 on December 28, 2006, 11:00:07 AM
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i hate those dreams.I once had a triple dream when i was very sick it was so outta control!!!Â
1/5 (Meh)
First of all, if it's scary, describe MORE GORE and make it a higher violence rating. Second, this deserves a moderate violence. No blood= Mild, Blood= Moderate, Limb from Limb Screach Wreching Gore= Explicit. Third of all, it's too short and not detailed enough. Just follow these three tips. Flesh it out, Pull more people's flesh out, Put a higher rating of flesh on it. Fleshy de flesh flesh,
Aidan Flesh Aenima