My fanfic!
Submitted April 22, 2004 Updated April 23, 2004 Status Incomplete | this is my idea of a movie! there's a sad and good surprise at da end!
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Cartoons » My Life as a Teenage Robot |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The news!
Submitted: April 22, 2004 • Updated: April 22, 2004
Word count: 262 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 258
Chapter 3 - I'm on my way!
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 124 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 191
Chapter 4 - The journey
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 113 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 183
Chapter 5 - The battle
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 165 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 193
Chapter 6 - No Way Out
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 159 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 438
Chapter 7 - The Happy Ending! (Finally)
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 104 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 236
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medicsciencegirl on May 14, 2013, 3:29:36 AM
yes nice,but with CPR its maybe better hihi,as jenny perform cpr after that tuck checked pulse,lol you know she has a defibrillator like i saw in tvpower9x on May 13, 2007, 8:53:02 AM
Pretty good! Though, why did you drop the becoming human thing fully? Well, I will also shamlessly plug for my fan fic! Read It! Though, this one is good! Okay, I'm done.power9x on June 11, 2007, 2:41:26 AM
Over time, I've realized I need to be tougher on this story. The flow was really choppy, you dropped the human concept, and it was really broken. A good idea that was executed very poorly. If you want a good fanfic in the MLAATR universe, goto my page, not here. I wish I released it when MLAATR was still popular here, and people would comment on it more than the great amount now. Oh well. It's not that sad even. I see alot of potential, but no follow through. Bye.Cutelilteen on October 28, 2005, 10:39:44 AM
I hope I didn't offend you or anything. I wouldn't want to hurt one of my friend's feelings.Cutelilteen on September 22, 2005, 4:45:32 AM
Hmm... The plot was a little hard to understand and the chapters were kinda short, but other then that this story wasn't too bad. Keep up the good work!