The town of guilt
Submitted February 21, 2010 Updated February 21, 2010 Status Complete | hey i''ll try to post smthing which popped into my head :3 hope you''ll liek it >w<
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Chapter 1 - The Town of Guilt
Submitted: February 21, 2010 • Updated: February 21, 2010
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SilverKitsune on September 28, 2010, 4:21:50 PM
SilverKitsune on (Chapter: 1)
The idea for this poem was good :), the only thing I would suggest is learning how to make it flow. Poems have periods, they don't just run on :). Read a few poems from books so you gain get a feel for the many rhythms they have :)Renmei on February 21, 2010, 4:57:02 PM
Renmei on (Chapter: index)
sounds poetic i kinda like it :)