A big mistake

Chapter 1 - Introductions
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: July 13, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Kaoru's appearence
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: August 5, 2007
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Chapter 3 - hikaga the teachers worst nightmare!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 4 - detention from a whoopie cushion
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 5 - The begining of a stalker
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 6 - New roommate
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 7 - kaoru has a fanclub!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Kaoru's past
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 9 - an akward silence
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 8, 2007
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Chapter 10 - GLOMP!
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 11 - the big fight and claires arrival
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 12 - Meeting Claire
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
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Chapter 13 - a trip to the theater
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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Chapter 14 - Sleepover
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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Chapter 15 - spin the bottle!
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
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Chapter 16 - Spying 1
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
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Chapter 17 - This ones for all the cookies!
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
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Chapter 18 - should we even ask..?
Submitted: August 25, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
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Chapter 19 - Sanome's plan! we go where!?
Submitted: August 27, 2007 • Updated: August 27, 2007
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Chapter 20 - christmas party setup
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 4, 2007
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Chapter 21 - the suckiest chapter in the entire world..
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
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Chapter 22 - "the fight for our lives!"
Submitted: September 10, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
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Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 14, 2007
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Chapter 24 - hikaga's fight, the girls are in trouble!
Submitted: September 17, 2007 • Updated: September 17, 2007
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Chapter 25 - Xel's doom, the end *bows*
Submitted: September 23, 2007 • Updated: September 23, 2007
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TKxKari224 on February 16, 2008, 7:05:42 AM

TKxKari224 on February 16, 2008, 7:05:42 AM (Chapter: index)

zomg!! YEAH!!!!!!!! >.<

THAT WOULD BE FREAKING AWESOME!! O.O *explodes* omg! seriously i love this idea!!1 am going to do it!!! :D

I wonder how i should start though..and will they be older, hmm...these are the things a writer needs to think of XD

TKxKari224 on February 17, 2008, 11:58:36 PM

TKxKari224 on February 17, 2008, 11:58:36 PM (Chapter: index)

omg yeah!!!!! X3

One of them should turn evil >:3

but who, your right, who...hmmm

i think it should be one of these people:

Jin
Sanome
Hikaga

Then they could be all like: oh noersh!!

They the rest could try and save the one who turned evil!! OMG OMG!! im dying here! this is gonna be GREATT!!!

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:14:55 AM

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:14:55 AM (Chapter: index)

XD yeh! ^^

Lol yeah, thats the trouble :P

And ive alrady got one chapter up of the new one!! XD

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:17:57 AM

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:17:57 AM (Chapter: index)

SQUEE! ^^ i did! :D :D

omg! im so excited!! XD

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:21:04 AM

TKxKari224 on February 18, 2008, 12:21:04 AM (Chapter: index)

:D

TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 8:09:35 AM

TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 8:09:35 AM (Chapter: 25)

THANK YOU!!! *hugs* i loved it to *tear* but im planning on drawing scenes out of it ^^

TKxKari224 on October 2, 2007, 9:09:21 AM

TKxKari224 on October 2, 2007, 9:09:21 AM (Chapter: index)

yay ^^ thats awesome! :)

xEmotional on September 23, 2007, 10:24:06 AM

xEmotional on September 23, 2007, 10:24:06 AM (Chapter: 25)

whoooooo :]
kaoru is so great !

TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 5:33:52 AM

TKxKari224 on September 24, 2007, 5:33:52 AM (Chapter: 25)

xD is that all ur gonna sy!? lol.

gaaralover1 on September 17, 2007, 12:08:43 PM

gaaralover1 on September 17, 2007, 12:08:43 PM (Chapter: 5)

Awesome.. What school do these people go to?

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:42 AM

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:42 AM (Chapter: 5)

the school in the clouds or something like that XD ^^

xEmotional on September 17, 2007, 7:56:43 AM

xEmotional on September 17, 2007, 7:56:43 AM (Chapter: 24)

uh oh, spagettio :o

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:17 AM

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:51:17 AM (Chapter: 24)

yuppers ^^

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:50:25 AM

TKxKari224 on September 18, 2007, 4:50:25 AM (Chapter: 24)

heh heh xD

TKxKari224 on September 16, 2007, 4:51:27 AM

TKxKari224 on September 16, 2007, 4:51:27 AM (Chapter: 23)

lol

xEmotional on September 14, 2007, 5:51:31 AM

xEmotional on September 14, 2007, 5:51:31 AM (Chapter: 23)

it's .. XEL . lolol rofl omg lol ahaha lmao ahaha lol omg rofl .
just kiddin' .

TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 8:08:36 AM

TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 8:08:36 AM (Chapter: 22)

xD

xEmotional on September 10, 2007, 10:18:28 AM

xEmotional on September 10, 2007, 10:18:28 AM (Chapter: 22)

oh mah gawd .
kaoru is so cool, its not even funny .

TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 4:55:30 AM

TKxKari224 on September 11, 2007, 4:55:30 AM (Chapter: 22)

xD