Deadly
Submitted January 16, 2006 Updated February 5, 2006 Status Incomplete | Chiro wakes up and is sick, but will not listen to the monkey team, they say for him to rest and stay in bed. What will happen to chiro? Read and find out.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Waking sickness
Submitted: January 16, 2006 • Updated: January 16, 2006
Word count: 1041 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 537
Chapter 2 - Chapter 2 Figuring things out
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: January 24, 2006
Word count: 816 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 468
Chapter 3 - Chapter 3 Captured
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: January 24, 2006
Word count: 711 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 508
Chapter 4 - Chapter 4, The escape and a new friend
Submitted: February 2, 2006 • Updated: February 2, 2006
Word count: 1001 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 508
Chapter 5 - Chapter 5 getting to know you..
Submitted: February 5, 2006 • Updated: February 5, 2006
Word count: 438 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 470
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artangel on August 28, 2007, 12:58:30 PM
awesomeness!!Netbug009 on December 27, 2006, 4:29:23 PM
Good fic, but this chapter is kinda rushed. I think you'd grab much more dramatic tension if you slowed it down a little.artangel on November 29, 2006, 8:53:42 AM
awesome!!!! great job! *art angel wink*omek on October 26, 2006, 8:30:18 AM
ok if thats the end then u shall burn in hell!*arms get covered with diamond and smashes hand together* MAKE MORE NOW! OR ELSE! Â
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omek on October 26, 2006, 8:26:50 AM
hmmmmmmmmm PIE!omek on October 26, 2006, 8:22:32 AM
jinmay's a robot who got's the hot's for chiro like he does for her.Â
Saiyusha: how will they have kids? with a funnel or sumthin?
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Omek: ok dude thats jus fracki...... AHHHHHHHHHHH DISTURBING IMAGES OF THE FUNNEL THING!*smacks saiyusha upside
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Saiyusha: OW!!!!!! WTH I DO?!
naomiintuiton64 on September 2, 2006, 3:23:12 AM
Ha this is like my favorite storie u have no idea how many times I'v read this u should make another one I'm totally faving this I'm suprised it took me so long to do this
Cyberranger14 on May 28, 2006, 1:44:14 PM
I love it man.Monkey-Ninja on February 6, 2006, 10:49:08 AM
Cool! Good chap!Froze8 on February 6, 2006, 4:45:37 AM
Ok more please!Froze8
alleycat6189 on February 3, 2006, 2:06:26 PM
Keep going!!! although it would have been cooler if he was still sick....*wonders if that potion actually worked* OOOOooooOOOOo was it all a trick to make him worse..... O.Osorry i like to come up with theroy's and see if their right...lol
Froze8 on February 3, 2006, 9:29:03 AM
Sweet!Froze8
Monkey-Ninja on February 2, 2006, 10:26:28 PM
That was cool, and so your character comes into the story.Froze8 on January 31, 2006, 5:24:11 AM
Who's Jinmay?Froze8
Monkey-Ninja on January 29, 2006, 2:06:50 AM
That was so cool! Keep going!alleycat6189 on January 27, 2006, 1:34:28 PM
DUDE!! KEEP GOING!!!!! lol....i love it your really good at art and writing!! alleycat6189 on January 24, 2006, 11:01:06 AM
OOoooooOOOOO your tourturing me!!! Keep going!!!morphin on January 17, 2006, 4:21:45 AM
yay monkey story love antauri and sparks[sprx77]Monkey-Ninja on January 16, 2006, 9:40:15 AM
Cool, update.