Deadly

Chapter 1 - Waking sickness
Submitted: January 16, 2006 • Updated: January 16, 2006
Word count: 1041 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 536

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2 Figuring things out
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: January 24, 2006
Word count: 816 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 468

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3 Captured
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: January 24, 2006
Word count: 711 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 508

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4, The escape and a new friend
Submitted: February 2, 2006 • Updated: February 2, 2006
Word count: 1001 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 507

Chapter 5 - Chapter 5 getting to know you..
Submitted: February 5, 2006 • Updated: February 5, 2006
Word count: 438 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 470

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artangel on August 28, 2007, 12:58:30 PM

artangel on August 28, 2007, 12:58:30 PM (Chapter: index)

awesomeness!!

Netbug009 on December 27, 2006, 4:29:23 PM

Netbug009 on December 27, 2006, 4:29:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

Good fic, but this chapter is kinda rushed. I think you'd grab much more dramatic tension if you slowed it down a little.

artangel on November 29, 2006, 8:53:42 AM

artangel on November 29, 2006, 8:53:42 AM (Chapter: 5)

awesome!!!! great job! *art angel wink*

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:30:18 AM

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:30:18 AM (Chapter: 5)

ok if thats the end then u shall burn in hell!*arms get covered with diamond and smashes hand together* MAKE MORE NOW! OR ELSE!
 
lol
 

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:26:50 AM

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:26:50 AM (Chapter: 4)

hmmmmmmmmm PIE!

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:22:32 AM

omek on October 26, 2006, 8:22:32 AM (Chapter: 3)

jinmay's a robot who got's the hot's for chiro like he does for her.
 
Saiyusha: how will they have kids? with a funnel or sumthin?
 
Omek: ok dude thats jus fracki...... AHHHHHHHHHHH DISTURBING IMAGES OF THE FUNNEL THING!*smacks saiyusha upside
 
Saiyusha: OW!!!!!! WTH I DO?!

naomiintuiton64 on September 2, 2006, 3:23:12 AM

naomiintuiton64 on September 2, 2006, 3:23:12 AM (Chapter: index)

Ha this is like my favorite storie u have no idea how many times I'v read this u should make another one I'm totally faving this

I'm suprised it took me so long to do this

Cyberranger14 on May 28, 2006, 1:44:14 PM

Cyberranger14 on May 28, 2006, 1:44:14 PM (Chapter: index)

I love it man.

Monkey-Ninja on February 6, 2006, 10:49:08 AM

Monkey-Ninja on February 6, 2006, 10:49:08 AM (Chapter: 5)

Cool! Good chap!

Froze8 on February 6, 2006, 4:45:37 AM

Froze8 on February 6, 2006, 4:45:37 AM (Chapter: 5)

Ok more please!
Froze8