Last wish
Submitted August 1, 2007 Updated August 10, 2007 Status Complete | i just wanted to write something down .i like how it came out.
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Chapter 1 - last wish
Submitted: August 1, 2007 • Updated: August 1, 2007
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Symphoniaprincess101 on August 21, 2007, 6:10:28 AM
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this reminds me of my poem "Symphoniaprincess101's Deepest Feelings"it was just beuatiful^^CutecatTalor on August 15, 2007, 8:20:41 AM
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hm.,,Sasukegurl4life on August 5, 2007, 2:36:10 PM
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................alchemest1 on August 1, 2007, 2:04:30 PM
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Wow! That was amazing! Where did you get the idea for that?! With a bit of polishing you will be a great writer. I loved it HONEST!TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 9:56:39 AM
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i dont really kno where i got the idea from i just kinda...wrote something down and it came out like thatalchemest1 on August 3, 2007, 3:52:10 PM
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Wow! That is a pretty cool set of verses for pulling them out of thin air. You really are talented! LOVE IT! ADDED TO FAVES.TheBestDamnThing on August 5, 2007, 1:18:34 PM
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wow thanksTheBestDamnThing on August 2, 2007, 1:55:28 AM
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thank u so much for the comment...much apreciated!AnimeCheeka on August 1, 2007, 11:02:07 PM
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Pretty! I wuvers it!~Bunny-Chan~
TheBestDamnThing on August 2, 2007, 1:55:53 AM
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thank u bunny chan!!Animegurl4life on August 1, 2007, 1:14:24 PM
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... omg ... i'm moved, shelby. i'm really moved. it's just... beautiful.TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 1:50:07 PM
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lolz thanks *hugs*jeffhardy2345 on August 1, 2007, 11:20:32 AM
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Shelby? That is wounderful! I could never write that!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 11:28:17 AM
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thank u!boredom strikes ideaswinxgirl21 on August 1, 2007, 6:47:41 AM
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That's beautiful! And I'm not just saying that to be nice (trust me, I know that you want your writing critiqued ^-^) It's so true, and the way you phrased it is beautiful! With some more pactice, you'll be great at writing!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 10:04:07 AM
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thank u so much for the enthusiasm.its funny what u can do when ur bored!lOlzwinxgirl21 on August 1, 2007, 10:23:13 AM
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yea, it is ^-^ That's actually when I get my best ideas for my stories!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 10:32:16 AM
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lolz ^_^TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 7:47:27 AM
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yes it is, meg,yes it isgaaragurl4life on August 1, 2007, 4:20:20 AM
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that good shelby u can b deep when u want to beTheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 5:30:50 AM
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Ya when i want to b!!!!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 12:09:46 PM
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WARNING!!!:very rare!