Such is Sorrow And Nothing More
Submitted December 18, 2007 Updated December 1, 2008 Status Complete | Poetry describing my life... Nothing that would matter to you...
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Fallen Angel
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
Word count: 145 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 330
Chapter 2 - Death
Submitted: December 27, 2007 • Updated: December 27, 2007
Word count: 108 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 354
Chapter 3 - Left
Submitted: January 20, 2008 • Updated: January 20, 2008
Word count: 33 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 325
Chapter 4 - The Heavens Cried
Submitted: January 20, 2008 • Updated: January 20, 2008
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 313
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pixiepumpkin on December 5, 2008, 1:52:35 AM
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XDarkTinkerbellX on March 2, 2008, 1:53:11 AM
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Dante,...these are beautiful,....I love them,.....
please write more of them,...
<3 Tink
TheForgotten on March 2, 2008, 2:01:26 AM
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I will, friend. My quill does not stop.meray on January 29, 2008, 10:19:07 PM
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the poems are so deep like the black night with no light. when the wolf tries to howl but what will he howl at? if noithing is so pure then what is pure. is something like a rose or a red rose that can only cry with blood? the poems touched me like the sounds of people crying with laughter when people need love i am one of those people who needs love. what love can bring us is only...fear is it that we fear to love?TheForgotten on January 31, 2008, 2:56:42 AM
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Love brings so many things..... Fear is among them....meray on January 31, 2008, 4:32:48 AM
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meray on January 31, 2008, 10:18:43 PM
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*blushes* then you too seeking love? or are you afraid of whut might become of love? then why do we fear love? is love the time to have happiness or is it to be depressed cuase nobody will love? i too am deppressed but still finding myself in the dark with one a rose that cries blood, or the black rose which also cries blood. cuase nobody loves a deppressed person in there life? or is it that...we can't love?TheForgotten on February 2, 2008, 7:02:33 AM
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It's hard to love when you have a heart that doesn't beat....meray on February 5, 2008, 2:36:19 AM
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especially the ones who can't love proper to trick youGardian_of_the_shadow_relm on January 29, 2008, 4:54:13 AM
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Oh man....I feel for ya. thats so sad.....but beautiful poem though.TheForgotten on January 29, 2008, 9:20:37 AM
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Thank you....Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on January 29, 2008, 4:57:47 AM
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How frustratating.....*hugs* your never really alone, listen with your heart .....man that sounds cheesy. But it's true. ^_^TheForgotten on January 29, 2008, 9:20:22 AM
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How can one listen to their heart, if it has no heartbeat...?mickyD503 on January 20, 2008, 11:51:05 PM
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So... you are earth bound and rejected by heaven and hell, terribly depressing, how can you live your life of despiration?TheForgotten on January 22, 2008, 11:30:44 AM
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I do not really live....... I simply exist..... And what I do now..... I simply tend to the empty household that was my parent's.... Care for my mother's roses...... Study in my father's laboratory....... Read in the library....... And write, of course....... Write as they wished of me.......chaos_kitten8 on January 22, 2008, 7:17:13 AM
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TheForgotten on January 22, 2008, 11:27:38 AM
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I made not too many friends there.... Although...... I did make what one could consider a friend....... I now remember...... She asked of me to thank Holly.....chaos_kitten8 on December 27, 2007, 7:37:11 AM
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TheForgotten on December 27, 2007, 2:30:09 PM
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Thank you.... Though I have never heard of these Lemony Snicket books you speak of.....chaos_kitten8 on December 28, 2007, 7:11:28 AM
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TheForgotten on January 19, 2008, 12:01:35 PM
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They do sound rather.... Sad...........DragonGirl1136 on January 23, 2008, 1:12:56 AM
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Naw, they're awesome! =DDragonGirl1136 on December 20, 2007, 11:43:02 PM
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...........*wipes tear from eye* That's incredible. Really deep. *goes to throw away my pathetic poetry*
TheForgotten on December 21, 2007, 4:40:19 AM
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I thank you as well...
(Summary of your whole poem/story)
So.you're floating between the border of heaven and hell? You've had a rough life I see, even rougher then mine. Do not worry though, I know there are people who love you! I mean look at all of us! Your friends on FAC, we're here and ALWAYS will be Danti-chan!