Seeing Yellow

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Submitted
June 4, 2008
Updated
June 4, 2008
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Chapters: 1
Size: 5k
Words: 952
Comments: 5
Views: 1,629
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Rating: 1

This is something that i did a picture about first, then made a story to go along with it. I worked really REALLY hard on this. Also, it is involved with fleetway Super Sonic, for you fangirls ^^

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Category: Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Transormations
Submitted: June 4, 2008 • Updated: June 4, 2008
Word count: 952 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 331

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WhiteLighting681 on June 9, 2008, 6:47:23 AM

WhiteLighting681 on June 9, 2008, 6:47:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

<3 <3 You really aren't bad at all <3 Pretty good, actually - the ending was especially good. Ties in with the title... It was ace, mate <3

TheGameArtCritic on June 9, 2008, 9:01:43 AM

TheGameArtCritic on June 9, 2008, 9:01:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

THANKS!!!! I really wanted at least ONE person to say something about this! You have made my day!

WhiteLighting681 on June 11, 2008, 7:26:50 AM

WhiteLighting681 on June 11, 2008, 7:26:50 AM (Chapter: index)

My pleasure <3 <3 But really, to get more comments, you should comment on other people's writing. Promise you'll check me out, kay? <3

TheGameArtCritic on June 13, 2008, 1:22:08 AM

TheGameArtCritic on June 13, 2008, 1:22:08 AM (Chapter: index)

of course i will!

TheGameArtCritic on June 4, 2008, 8:34:45 AM

TheGameArtCritic on June 4, 2008, 8:34:45 AM (Chapter: 1)

EXTREMELLY SHORT.