Sanctuary

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Submitted
June 14, 2005
Updated
June 14, 2005
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 16
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I wrote this poem when I was watching the firemen put out my house a while ago. One of the rooms used to be so bright, especially in the morning, so i reffered to it as a sanctuary. But the smoke blackened it, and killed one of the cats that stayed i

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Chapter 1 - Sanctuary
Submitted: June 14, 2005 • Updated: June 14, 2005
Word count: 16 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 143

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_Sanctuary_ on August 8, 2005, 10:28:25 PM

_Sanctuary_ on August 8, 2005, 10:28:25 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow, it is powerful even though it is not long, and + it is my username!
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Thisisreallymyusername on July 27, 2005, 10:59:49 AM

Thisisreallymyusername on July 27, 2005, 10:59:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

Well its not Haiku...if i put it into 3 lines it would be 5, 5, 5 so...Thanks for the compliment!

Vampire_King_Gothika on July 26, 2005, 2:09:49 PM

Vampire_King_Gothika on July 26, 2005, 2:09:49 PM (Chapter: 1)

Short but powerful...Is that supposed to be a haiku or something? Well, anywho I liked it. I think O_O;;;