Iris

Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1435 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 182

Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3745 • Size: 20k • Comments: 10 • views: 195

Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2068 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 251

Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 16 - Taint
Submitted: January 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 853 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 166

Chapter 18 - Found
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 19 - Purse
Submitted: January 26, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 174

Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 196

Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 179

Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 161

Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 25 - Beautiful
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 26 - Paradox
Submitted: February 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2120 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 185

Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2842 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 196

Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2100 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 186

Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2850 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 212

Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2034 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 171

Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2411 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 179

Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 211

Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1611 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 173

Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1472 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 181

Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 2982 • Size: 16k • Comments: 8 • views: 185

Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2527 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 198

Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 209

Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
Word count: 2868 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 176

Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
Word count: 2236 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 159

Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 870 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 187

Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
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Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
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Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
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Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
Word count: 2271 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 202

Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
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Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 2821 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 175

Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
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Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
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Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 1525 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 156

Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
Word count: 1579 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 172

Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 569 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 150

Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 906 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 148

Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 1276 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 156

Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 3176 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 137

Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 920 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 126

Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
Word count: 1002 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 136

Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
Word count: 2631 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 134

Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 1911 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 128

Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 132

Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 1202 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 131

Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
Word count: 3044 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 137

Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 5074 • Size: 28k • Comments: 3 • views: 159

Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
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theWriter on January 31, 2006, 8:27:40 AM

theWriter on January 31, 2006, 8:27:40 AM (Chapter: 1)

Don't apologize for the writing. You clearly have a grasp of plot, character foil, and description. However, on the subject of proper punctuation...it is difficult to figure out when one paragraph ends and the other begins, which often ruins the reading experience because it becomes difficult to space each block of text. Just press the enter button and you'll do fine. Besides that, though, this was nice. So far, I'm interested.

Bravo.

sakura_aka_OOC on January 28, 2006, 3:49:21 AM

sakura_aka_OOC on January 28, 2006, 3:49:21 AM (Chapter: 20)

gaaah that was so cute!!! i loved it! keep writing ^_^

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:41:49 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:41:49 AM (Chapter: 16)

Oooo... this Raguel character seems kinda hawt. ^^ I can't wait to see how you develop him! (He's going to be a semi-big part in the story... right?)

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:41:03 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:41:03 AM (Chapter: 15)

Cliffhangeeeerrrrr... O_O *runs to next chapter*

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:40:36 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:40:36 AM (Chapter: 14)

NUUU~! IRIS! You're a horrible father figure Valkyre! You shouldn't leave poor little Iris alone like that!!! >_< *frantically runs to the next chapter*

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:37:50 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:37:50 AM (Chapter: 13)

That thing creeped me out! I could see it's eyes in my MIND! O_O I was right about it coming from the lab, though. *dances* So... *hugs you* Great chappie!

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:37:13 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:37:13 AM (Chapter: 12)

WOO! Hooray for super-crunchy action! That thing that attacked them was really creepy. O_o Is it some kind of weird experiment thing from the lab?

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:36:33 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:36:33 AM (Chapter: 11)

Aww! Valkyre is so fatherly! X3 And I just wanna hug poor little Iris... He's so very angsty! XD

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:35:46 AM

SenayDragon on January 27, 2006, 9:35:46 AM (Chapter: 10)

I like how Iris interacted with the spider. I would've been screaming bloody murder... ^^;;;