Sun and Moon-The Lunar Twins
Submitted April 9, 2007 Updated April 10, 2007 Status Incomplete | A Student choice piece started at my school. I thought i'd post it and continue it here at FAC! It's kinda like, Harry Potter meets Superheroes! Hoot!
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Chapter 1 - The Birth of Hereos
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 1145 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 221
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power9x on June 16, 2007, 7:15:17 AM
power9x on (Chapter: 1)
Great job on the story! A bit anticlimatic, but anticlimatic for me is anything without a huge battle, internal or external. Though, great job on the description and flow, you've got the perfect balance between narrating all the time and a script. I've been finding a ton of writers here today, and I'd like it if you'd read my 6 fanfics here sometime. Well, bye.Tron500 on July 6, 2007, 2:21:29 PM
Tron500 on (Chapter: 1)
Dont worry, battles shall come!And sure I'll read ur stories!^^
twinsanity120 on July 3, 2007, 7:04:06 AM
twinsanity120 on (Chapter: 1)
neat story,i loved it,,*gives u a cookie*