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Mouse Traps

An attempt to write in the style of Stephen King...attempt being the key word. This is just too gross, even for me...What am I talking about? You'll have to read to find out...not for the faint of stomache...

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Chapter 1 - Mouse Traps
Submitted: April 8, 2004 • Updated: April 8, 2004
Word count: 297 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 173

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dynamite_spoony on February 1, 2006, 11:59:23 AM

dynamite_spoony on (Chapter: 1)
dynamite_spoonyWow...O_O That's pretty gruesome! But well-written! Can't really say I'm very grossed out though, coming from a person with several pet rats...but in his mouth? Yeah, that is pretty nasty...

Good work!

AkiraOokami on April 8, 2004, 10:36:08 AM

AkiraOokami on (Chapter: 1)
AkiraOokamiYay death!! It reminds me of this movie I once saw, its about this old guy who hired some guy to kill his cat because it was evil, but the cat jumped inside his mouth, crawed into this throat and he died.