Chapter 1 - Painted Smile
Submitted April 25, 2004 Updated April 28, 2004 Status Incomplete | Just a poem written when bored....
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Chapter 1 - Painted Smile
Chapter 1 - Painted Smile
Do you see this smile, that's on my face
Well do you see, that it's only a fake
It seems my feeling are trapped in this tomb
In the air the pain and sadness looms
I hold back my tears and face my fears
My confidence slides away as I paint a smile
My feelings fade away as I'm put on trail
No one to hold me tight
No one to tell me it's gonna be all right
Just keep in mind every time I smile
That happy feeling only last awhile
I laugh but I'm screaming inside
My life washing away with the tide
Cold and lonely I step in
Knowing the happiness will soon end
Knowing these feelings will soon crash in
Walking around with this smile painted upon my face
Knowing no one can tell this happiness is only a fake
When will these cold days end
Maybe all I need is a little hope
Maybe just a friend
This paint will just soon wash away
But this pain, just seems to stay....
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Wrote this when depressed, if you can't tell. Don't have to comment if you want, just wanted to post more, thats all.
Well do you see, that it's only a fake
It seems my feeling are trapped in this tomb
In the air the pain and sadness looms
I hold back my tears and face my fears
My confidence slides away as I paint a smile
My feelings fade away as I'm put on trail
No one to hold me tight
No one to tell me it's gonna be all right
Just keep in mind every time I smile
That happy feeling only last awhile
I laugh but I'm screaming inside
My life washing away with the tide
Cold and lonely I step in
Knowing the happiness will soon end
Knowing these feelings will soon crash in
Walking around with this smile painted upon my face
Knowing no one can tell this happiness is only a fake
When will these cold days end
Maybe all I need is a little hope
Maybe just a friend
This paint will just soon wash away
But this pain, just seems to stay....
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Wrote this when depressed, if you can't tell. Don't have to comment if you want, just wanted to post more, thats all.
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Lanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:58:51 PM
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cool poem, u hav talent! ;), if you wanna u can check out some of mine and tell me wat u think ! ;),L8ER lANFEARcurrupted on August 18, 2004, 3:00:30 PM
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sounds like i feel now keep at it. ur awsomeweird_klown on July 29, 2004, 11:47:56 AM
weird_klown on
very nice poem!..me likes *faves*BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 1:01:58 PM
BlackWolf on
very emotional indeed. ^^ although it is depressing, this poem is deeply expressed, and nicly done. i luv it actually, because it reminds me of myself, and others that walk around with a mask to the world. *favs* MusicBitch on June 14, 2004, 1:15:21 PM
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Thats how i feel like everyday of my life. Fakeing a smile when i am really dieing inside you are a great at writeing poems and how your emotion spills on the page i wish i could write like you i love it *adds to favs.EmilyTheStrange on May 3, 2004, 10:33:18 AM
This is sooo good*Sobs* what i feel like somedays...Great poetry keep it up!tinystarkitten on April 29, 2004, 12:02:57 PM
reminds me of what my friend writes.Ifrit-YoukaiSei on April 25, 2004, 3:12:35 PM
I really lik teh poem Faith, even though it is depressing ^^;;; wish I could write poetry like you cuz I *coughsuckcough* at poetry *adds poem to favs*