A Painted Smile

Chapter 1 - Painted Smile
Submitted: April 25, 2004 • Updated: April 25, 2004
Word count: 205 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 246

Chapter 2 - My Ticket
Submitted: April 28, 2004 • Updated: April 28, 2004
Word count: 282 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 299

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Lanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:58:51 PM

Lanfear on March 22, 2005, 5:58:51 PM (Chapter: 1)

cool poem, u hav talent! ;), if you wanna u can check out some of mine and tell me wat u think ! ;),L8ER lANFEAR

currupted on August 18, 2004, 3:00:30 PM

currupted on August 18, 2004, 3:00:30 PM (Chapter: 1)

sounds like i feel now keep at it. ur awsome

weird_klown on July 29, 2004, 11:47:56 AM

weird_klown on July 29, 2004, 11:47:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

very nice poem!..me likes *faves*

BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 1:01:58 PM

BlackWolf on June 26, 2004, 1:01:58 PM (Chapter: 1)

very emotional indeed. ^^ although it is depressing, this poem is deeply expressed, and nicly done. i luv it actually, because it reminds me of myself, and others that walk around with a mask to the world. *favs*

MusicBitch on June 14, 2004, 1:15:21 PM

MusicBitch on June 14, 2004, 1:15:21 PM (Chapter: 1)

Thats how i feel like everyday of my life. Fakeing a smile when i am really dieing inside you are a great at writeing poems and how your emotion spills on the page i wish i could write like you i love it *adds to favs.

EmilyTheStrange on May 3, 2004, 10:33:18 AM

EmilyTheStrange on May 3, 2004, 10:33:18 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is sooo good*Sobs* what i feel like somedays...Great poetry keep it up!

Silver_Charm on April 30, 2004, 11:14:33 PM

Silver_Charm on April 30, 2004, 11:14:33 PM (Chapter: 2)

Woah... that's DEEP, man. Both poems are just... wooh. *faves author and poems*

tinystarkitten on April 29, 2004, 12:02:57 PM

tinystarkitten on April 29, 2004, 12:02:57 PM (Chapter: 1)

reminds me of what my friend writes.

Ifrit-YoukaiSei on April 25, 2004, 3:12:35 PM

Ifrit-YoukaiSei on April 25, 2004, 3:12:35 PM (Chapter: 1)

I really lik teh poem Faith, even though it is depressing ^^;;; wish I could write poetry like you cuz I *coughsuckcough* at poetry *adds poem to favs*