Seto Millionaire
Submitted December 7, 2003 Updated December 7, 2003 Status Incomplete | Seto was blackmailed by mokuba into participating on a game show where he has to date the four lucky contestants. What if Jou's one of them? Seto/Jou, Yami/Yugi (shounen-Ai)(Based on Joe Millionaire)
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Chapter 1 - Beginnings
Submitted: December 7, 2003 • Updated: December 7, 2003
Word count: 2006 • Size: 11k • Comments: 17 • views: 601
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KingdomHeartShera on October 3, 2006, 4:01:25 AM
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I like the concept of a ‘Joe Millionaire’ version with Seto as Joe but I think you focus to much on your dislike for Anuz’s character. Yes most people don’t like her but it shouldn’t be a major focal of a story in which she really doesn’t need a main part. In fact she could just float in the background, or simply be mentioned as the reason they were there at all. I like your story though, you have a great idea going here, I just think that you need to bring the focus back to Joey and Seto, and the cast that will be interacting with them the most. You have a lot of talent so I’m sure you can do it. This was a good chapter, but I know you can do better! *grins* Sorry if this sounds offensive, but I think you’d want an honest review. It’s an ok chapter but it could be done better, I hope to see more of the story soon. *waves*
XD Have you noticed that anyone who loves the Yugi X Yami pairing absolutely hates Anzu? I have! XD We're protecting our men's men from the unwanted woman! =>.<=
Totally going to fave this. <3