The Last Remaining Ancient 1
Submitted May 28, 2007 Updated October 6, 2007 Status Complete | Just a little story object thing I thought up in my spare time. Nothing that extravagant.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Shinra Mansion
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 476 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 336
Chapter 2 - The Temple of the Ancients
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: June 7, 2007
Word count: 562 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 327
Chapter 3 - The Forgotten City
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 438 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 340
Chapter 4 - At Mideel
Submitted: July 10, 2007 • Updated: July 16, 2007
Word count: 305 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 333
Chapter 5 - The Proposal
Submitted: July 15, 2007 • Updated: July 17, 2007
Word count: 432 • Size: 2k • Comments: 14 • views: 314
Chapter 6 - The Lifestream
Submitted: July 23, 2007 • Updated: July 23, 2007
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 326
Chapter 7 - To Midgar
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
Word count: 523 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 336
Chapter 8 - The one before chapter 9
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 407 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 313
Chapter 9 - This is the epilogue; I skipped the next part.
Submitted: October 4, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 250 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 283
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kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:47:06 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 4)
you write sooo good. I am getting sad remembering all the stuff that happened. I haven't played this in atleast a year. *eyes start feeling with tears again*kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:43:38 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 3)
Oh man here come the water works... Not you Sun but me. SOOO SAAAAD!!!. When I put my oc in the story I had it where she sprinted in front of Sephiroths blade and the sword went clear through her and Aeris. In her mind she was like "No why couldn't I have died instead." I bet you would think the same thing. Seeing as my character can bring heself back from the dead. NOOOOOOOOOOO *cries even more*kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:26:49 AM
kylaVegeta on (Chapter: 1)
This is good. sounds like something that would good on in my mind. I always end up putting my oc in final fantasy games. This is really good. Alot better then the one I wrote and is still writing.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:56:36 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 6)
I like how it's all serious but then kinda comic relief-y by saying things like the overratedness of unconsciousness at the same time ^^lolz, that just reminded me of this one time, me and my friends were thinking about making up a "religion" call Jenova's Witnesses XP
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:51:23 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 6)
sephiroth could be teh high priest of jenovas witnesses!!!!! and loz could be the mourner (u know, when jenova's witness members r kiled!)Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:51:18 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 5)
What Vincent asks Sun is funny, but extreeeeeeeemely OOC. I could never ever picture him saying that in reality (well, I mean in like y'know official stuff anyway. Obviously Vincent himself will never be seen in reality), which is slightly annoying.Yay Red Bull! He rox
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:50:00 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
yah mee hee vinny:WHAT exactly did i say?
me: oh nuthin.
vinny:...really. *looks up teh fanfic* u r so dead.
me: yipes!!!!! *runs away, dodging vinny's bullets*
Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:46:54 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 4)
hrm...is this going off the part where Cloud is a total veg for a while and you play as Tifa or did you make this up? I'm really getting the feeling that you've played this game 10x more recently than I have and I'm beginning to feel a little stupid/FF7 deprived -_-'aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:48:11 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 4)
well ive restarted it over and over and can never seem to play it right. but last time i played this was last month-well, actually, a month and a week ago-a month ago i was grounded for talking back-excessively stupid of me-to Mom.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:21:32 AM
Kupo on (Chapter: index)
dat sux. but seriously, tell me what you're stuck at and maybe I can help. I've played the whole thing through twice, except for not bothering to do the Sephy fight in the end the second time.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:51:23 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
well the only thing im doing wrong is not getting some key items. im not very thorough mee hee hee......Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:40:42 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 2)
yay it's so cool, like I'm revisiting this part, seeing as I haven't played it in forever. I love this part of the game too! Lots of story and lots of pleasantly (sort of) infuriating little puzzles! And I ask you, why the heck, when Aeris could be revived by a pheonix down, is she left for dead while Cait Sith who is OBLITERATED gets to come back???? And everyone hates him!!! Gah! What a horrific little plothole. ok, so him coming back isn't a plothole, but the pheonix down thing is anyway! and I mean seriously no one even wants Cait Sith back and obviously the producers don't have a problem with permanently getting rid of your party members, and this wouldn't even be an actual death!! It'd just be one less random little what-teh-heck-were-they-thinking moment! And c'mon, surely Shinra wouldn't have more than one ridiculous remote control fat moogle/cat toy hanging around!!??? *pant pant* ok I'll stop ranting now...aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:46:14 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 2)
I tink u can only be revived with a phoenix down if ur KOed, not dead.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:20:15 AM
Kupo on (Chapter: index)
I've thought of that, but I'm pretty sure it isn't true. More than anything just because they're called pheonix downs. Like y'know in the pokemon games they're called revives, and use them to revive pokemon that are clearly labled fainted (or ko or something like that anyway. the point is they're labled) but in FF they give you every reason to think they're really dead and then call em pheonix downs. pheonixes are mythical birds that KILL THEMSELVES every 500 years or so just cuz they're bored and then they regenerate. and that's why they're called pheonix downs, cuz they're for bringing ppl back to life.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:31:07 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 1)
hmm very interesting. actual paragraphs would be nice (accidentally read a couple lines twice since they all look the same from the left) but at least it's not a text wall. Question: when she turns back into a human does their light source go out?btw, isn't the vin vin room (lol) just like the creepiest place evah or what?!! When I was playing DoC I was all spooked out to go in there and I actually screamed when one a those random battle dudes popped out of the coffin *shudders*
aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:44:56 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 1)
HEY!!!!! Dont give away anything from DoC yet, Im gonna play it in a few days! (Note: I cant play in CA b/c grandma doesnt have a PS2.) And yes, their light source goes out. She only has fire when shes a cat.Kupo on August 1, 2007, 7:16:58 AM
Kupo on (Chapter: index)
Sorry! I thought you'd already played it or something. ^^' at least that's not really a plot spoiler.aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 9:19:15 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
Tahts ok. Tahts why I didnt really make up a Sun plot line for DoC, is b/c I havnt played it yet. All she does is watch teh kids.Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:02:48 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 2)
hm. I'm yet again curious to know what happens...I only watched my sister play the game...I missed out on certain parts I suppose.Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:34:58 PM
Kupo on (Chapter: 2)
lol I did that with my brother for a long time before I ever played it. Entertaining isn't it? kind of rotten tho, how seeing big plot points makes them spoilers for later since you can't fully appreciate them yet -_-'aeris7dragon on July 18, 2007, 2:44:48 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 2)
MISSED OUT!!! balderdash. maybe you should play it urself. my fave game!!!! i want dirge of cerberus 4 my bday YAY dirge of cerberus rpg-shooting game thats ALL VINNY!!! (oh yeah dont call him vinny dont wanna get slapped again...this time he might use his claw!)Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:25:41 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: index)
Meh bf gave it to meh...I couldn't get into it though. I tried..it just bored meh. I dunno why. O.o' strangeness...aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:36:28 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 2)
YAY I GOT DIRGE OF CERBERUS!!! I LOVE MY DADDY!!! REMAKE FF7!!!!!...sorry that last one was randomDestiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:44:25 PM
Destiny127 on (Chapter: 6)
aww...I love it. O^-^O thank you for continuing the series...this story always cheers meh up...and it's not retarded. -_-' I like it...aeris7dragon on July 28, 2007, 12:50:03 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 6)
I beg to differ about the retardedness...but thx!