Conflicts and Aftermath
Submitted May 9, 2007 Updated July 15, 2007 Status Incomplete | I am off school for the summer and I needed a project to keep me busy. I may not be the best writer, but I try. The title of the story may change. I haven't decided yet. Critiszm is welcome, but be nice don't flame me to bad. ^_^
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Persuasion
Submitted: May 9, 2007 • Updated: May 13, 2007
Word count: 2465 • Size: 13k • Comments: 5 • views: 510
Chapter 1 - Vacation Destination
Submitted: May 16, 2007 • Updated: May 16, 2007
Word count: 3742 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 355
Chapter 2 - Sorrow and pain
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: May 28, 2007
Word count: 1539 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 352
Chapter 3 - Detainment with a Purpose
Submitted: July 3, 2007 • Updated: July 3, 2007
Word count: 3554 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 333
Chapter 4 - General's toy and Welcome to Despin
Submitted: July 15, 2007 • Updated: July 15, 2007
Word count: 2221 • Size: 11k • Comments: 3 • views: 330
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deletestar4 on February 15, 2008, 2:13:17 PM
well you told me what happens next lolzpainblack on February 13, 2008, 10:17:05 AM
i like it its bettr than what i cam white id get bored on the frist parigraf =)
yzak23 on August 6, 2007, 1:15:46 PM
I like it, I love it, I want some more of it! lol It's good, a lot better than what I can do.edthealchemist on July 21, 2007, 2:31:42 PM
nice story u have some skillFalconlobo on July 16, 2007, 5:43:56 PM
cool is it a time machine to set things right beforethey went wrong or something
nextguardian on July 15, 2007, 12:07:54 PM
Great stuff A1! Poor Fox, he can't catch a break! Great job with description, and, lol, Anthony is killing me! I think I know someone like him!nextguardian on July 3, 2007, 1:11:09 PM
This is a great chapter, simply put! I love the "polite voice that still registered dislike in every syllable." Great chapter!
Falconlobo on July 3, 2007, 7:43:57 AM
wow funnyy chapter That Panther reminds me Of Mr. Herriman^^nextguardian on May 29, 2007, 10:41:28 AM
This is a great chapter. I can see why you say it needs to be in there. Great job with the character development and description, I can actually picture this stuff!Falconlobo on May 28, 2007, 12:53:54 PM
aww that was sad nice job^^Falconlobo on May 22, 2007, 4:10:06 PM
cool chapter nice dialog and character interaction^^nextguardian on May 20, 2007, 12:14:36 PM
I'm going to echo my comments from the last chapter, and add that you're doing a really great job of portraying the characters. Keep it up!
nextguardian on May 20, 2007, 12:07:45 PM
This is some of the best dialogue I have ever seen!And great detail. You hit the perfect amount imo.
Falconlobo on May 9, 2007, 8:07:56 AM
cute and funny i like the dialog between them^^